Reviews of Glamorous Journey of the Female Protagonist

I had read five chapters so far and this is my review: The plot is interesting. It has that attention-grabbing factor that completely hooks me. It is as if I want to find out more by reading further. The characters are well-portrayed in which I can easily imagine how they look like. As for the dialogues, they seem fine to me except for the slight misuse of commas in the end of a dialogue. It is not a big problem and I do not mind. Stability of updates is an automatic five for me. Daily or not, it does not matter since I prefer quality of quantity. Good job author and keep doing your best!

I like it soo fffffffffffffffffaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

First and foremost, I just wanna thank you (author) for creating a great story that satisfied my guilty pleasure— a reverse harem story with enough sexual tension, romance and good plot at the same time. After all, some may try making a reverse harem story but at the end (when I can't even choose any of the male leads), the FL has to choose one and I honestly prefer it if she can just keep all of them cause why not? I hate it when the other male leads are also good but they will end up with unrequited love. Anyway, so long as it's just a fiction, let's all be open minded. Next, if I'm going to comment about the characters, well, I have a mixed feelings for the FL, Li Ming. She's powerful (and we can even say that she's OP) but since she's living in a world full of immortals, she's portrayed as not that powerful but not weak either. Sometimes I hate how she's confident that no matter what wrong she do, her mates are going to forgive her because they are hers. I feel like she's taking advantage of them. But at the same time, I love how she has no favoritism and can love them all. Now when it comes to the 5 male leads (or maybe 6, including her bondmate), I'm impressed that although the author cannot established a very strong differences for all the MLs, they still have their own differences. Lord Yueliang is gentle (just like how I imagine a moon deity), Supreme Immortal is a combination of strictness and gentleness. Heaven Emperor is the shy type, innocent little boy lol. Then Ruoshan can be flirty and gentle (just like what Li Ming said, he can be the combination of all). And Hei Long is a hot tempered dom. Lastly, Zhang Yong is the perfect definition of a second male lead. Though I like it if he entered her harem, I can't deny that I also love the friendship between him and Li Ming. It's just as beautiful as Li Ming's relationship with her mates. And I'm actually impressed that at the end, the author managed to established Zhang Yong's character as a very great friend, and that more than friends but less than lovers type of friendship between him and Li Ming, in my mind which made me contented with their platonic relationship. Now, let's talk about the greatness of the plot. It's kinda quick paced but not hurried and rushed. The romance is early but given that they are soulmates, then I think it's fine (anyway, considering that they waited for 50,000 years for her to appear, a fast romance make sense). The supporting characters, albeit background characters, also established their presence in the story even a little. It's not that they are important but it just make sense that they are there (can you understand it? I'm not even sure if I understood what I said anyway). Then the conflict is great, although I'm still a little baffled about the background story of the valkyrie since there's not much details about her and the banshee too. But anyway, the good vs. evil type of conflict was well established. Also, the snu snu is awesome as well. It has this sexual tension in the air mixed with pink bubbles (get what I mean?) the words are direct and the actions are detailed but the love between the FL and MLs made the scene hot and sweet at the same time (10/10 for the snu snu). And lastly, there's this attitude of the author that I don't know whether I should hate her/him or admire her/him for that. SHE/HE IS SO GREAT AT FORESHADOWING! To the point that even if it's supposed to be good, she/he can portray it as bad when she/he foreshadowed it (example, when Li Ming marked Wen Guiying. I should've known that when she/he said that it'll change their lives forever, it's a good thing. But the author, being the great tease that she/he was wrote it after the valkyrie was narrated to concoct an evil plan so of course, my first thought is negative). Anyway, I really have to give it to the author. That skill is really a talent. In addition, I also in awe of how you seamlessly combined the concept of Eastern cultivation and Western magic. I mean, it's not that this is the first time but I honestly love how you managed to give some background about magic and cultivation at the same time. You really have a lot of potential. Lastly, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! Can you bestowed this humble one some more extra chapters? Pleaseeeee?

It is the first time I have read a reverse harem, I am still reading chapter 21 and I am impressed by this novel. The protagonist is interesting and I hope that throughout the story it will continue with this good storyline.

This book is awesome, I am hooked and I can’t wait to read more! I came across it by accident but I’m glad i did, i can’t wait for more chapters to come out!

This is an absolutely awsome novel so far. I wish the author all the best so as to successfully continue posting lots and lots of chapters! So far my favorite novel!

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author you are the best . I am looking forward to read a reverse harem novel

when i first saw this novel I felt like it's the one, and I'm right. every chapter gives me happiness. especially that hot scenes lol.

At first i liked the book i enjoyed it , but the i'm like the f was going on the bish was like i'm going to sqve the world i mean it's good to be kind and all but this is over doing it and it was boring😒😒😒

I have not finished the story but I find this really enjoyable I want to see this as a webtoon I wanna see the amazing characters as drawings also dose anybody also have typing problems where the cursor moves to random spots when trying to type

I have just completed reading this book and I would like to say this book is good and I enjoyed reading this one. Such beautiful realms and lovely places for our FL. Combination of magic, cultivation and qi. just beautiful. Good work author

I found love through the free daily reading section this time!!! Immediately purchasing the remaining chapters after my 24 hours were up...😅 I worried about how the storyline could possibly tie together and actually progress to a satisfactory end with the smaller(than I'm used to) chapter numbers. But our magnificent author did a great job! And I must warn and advertise the excellent "adult" scenes we were blessed with!!! MAGNIFICENT pictures were painted by our loving author. Within these scenes(waggles eyebrows) and throughout the book the personalities of our FL and her mates were clearly and thoroughly shown to us. I feel like I knew them all, and could almost predict their actions because of my clear understanding of each character! And I feel that's an amazing feat to accomplish within 308 chapters. Oh! I mustn't forget the fact that the grammar was great too! I didn't even notice the "normal" errors that I've seen in other books on here. There are some of what seems like auto-correct misspelling errors. But there was nothing that made the story disjointed to me! If you find the intro interesting, then give it a chance and read the free chapters! You might just find one of your favorite stories, and a favorite author!!!🥰🥰🥰

This book is worth it. I love the reverse harem.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

like the overall development of both the characters and the story. It was not to short or long. loved the ending and full circle elements.

This is the best web novel I have ever read, please keep up with the good work author san! 🙏🏻💖 more power to your novel creations in the future! 💖💖💖👌🏻

I really enjoyed the development of the relationships between each character. the world is fun and I find the soul mates idea fun. I loved the story and am.happy to see it end in peace and happiness.

Really loving the series but hasn't updated as of yet so unsure if it's been dropped for a new series or not as it's only been 7 days since last update. But, I really hope it hasn't been dropped with how much cash I dropped to binge this series lol

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