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Anoscetia
AnoscetiaLv121yrAnoscetia

First and foremost, I just wanna thank you (author) for creating a great story that satisfied my guilty pleasure— a reverse harem story with enough sexual tension, romance and good plot at the same time. After all, some may try making a reverse harem story but at the end (when I can't even choose any of the male leads), the FL has to choose one and I honestly prefer it if she can just keep all of them cause why not? I hate it when the other male leads are also good but they will end up with unrequited love. Anyway, so long as it's just a fiction, let's all be open minded. Next, if I'm going to comment about the characters, well, I have a mixed feelings for the FL, Li Ming. She's powerful (and we can even say that she's OP) but since she's living in a world full of immortals, she's portrayed as not that powerful but not weak either. Sometimes I hate how she's confident that no matter what wrong she do, her mates are going to forgive her because they are hers. I feel like she's taking advantage of them. But at the same time, I love how she has no favoritism and can love them all. Now when it comes to the 5 male leads (or maybe 6, including her bondmate), I'm impressed that although the author cannot established a very strong differences for all the MLs, they still have their own differences. Lord Yueliang is gentle (just like how I imagine a moon deity), Supreme Immortal is a combination of strictness and gentleness. Heaven Emperor is the shy type, innocent little boy lol. Then Ruoshan can be flirty and gentle (just like what Li Ming said, he can be the combination of all). And Hei Long is a hot tempered dom. Lastly, Zhang Yong is the perfect definition of a second male lead. Though I like it if he entered her harem, I can't deny that I also love the friendship between him and Li Ming. It's just as beautiful as Li Ming's relationship with her mates. And I'm actually impressed that at the end, the author managed to established Zhang Yong's character as a very great friend, and that more than friends but less than lovers type of friendship between him and Li Ming, in my mind which made me contented with their platonic relationship. Now, let's talk about the greatness of the plot. It's kinda quick paced but not hurried and rushed. The romance is early but given that they are soulmates, then I think it's fine (anyway, considering that they waited for 50,000 years for her to appear, a fast romance make sense). The supporting characters, albeit background characters, also established their presence in the story even a little. It's not that they are important but it just make sense that they are there (can you understand it? I'm not even sure if I understood what I said anyway). Then the conflict is great, although I'm still a little baffled about the background story of the valkyrie since there's not much details about her and the banshee too. But anyway, the good vs. evil type of conflict was well established. Also, the snu snu is awesome as well. It has this sexual tension in the air mixed with pink bubbles (get what I mean?) the words are direct and the actions are detailed but the love between the FL and MLs made the scene hot and sweet at the same time (10/10 for the snu snu). And lastly, there's this attitude of the author that I don't know whether I should hate her/him or admire her/him for that. SHE/HE IS SO GREAT AT FORESHADOWING! To the point that even if it's supposed to be good, she/he can portray it as bad when she/he foreshadowed it (example, when Li Ming marked Wen Guiying. I should've known that when she/he said that it'll change their lives forever, it's a good thing. But the author, being the great tease that she/he was wrote it after the valkyrie was narrated to concoct an evil plan so of course, my first thought is negative). Anyway, I really have to give it to the author. That skill is really a talent. In addition, I also in awe of how you seamlessly combined the concept of Eastern cultivation and Western magic. I mean, it's not that this is the first time but I honestly love how you managed to give some background about magic and cultivation at the same time. You really have a lot of potential. Lastly, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! Can you bestowed this humble one some more extra chapters? Pleaseeeee?

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Glamorous Journey of the Female Protagonist

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Nightsummer20
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Thank you so much, dear, for such a wonderful review. You just made my day😊🥰 I really appreciate your effort for such a thorough review and thank you for picking my story and giving it a chance. This was the first story I wrote as an author and it's really close to my heart. That's why your appreciation for this story really means a lot to me. I'm not sure if I can do any side stories (extra chapters) for this story at the moment as I have other ongoing stories and it's been over a year since I finished this one so I'll also need to reread it to get into the feelings and emotions of the story before even coming up with ideas for extra chapters. I can try it sometime in the future but my current schedule doesn't allow me to delve back into this story (I'm a final year student doing my bachelor, so I need to focus on my studies too🥺). But you can check out my other stories, especially if you like the Reverse Harem genre. My two ongoing stories - "The Veil of Darkness" & "Academy of Immortals" are also RH Romance but western fantasy based. Once again a big thank you for all your support on my story😊💜💕

Anoscetia
AnoscetiaLv12Anoscetia

I understand. Speaking of, after I finished this story, I hurriedly went to your profile and if any of those are completed, I will immediately read them (I don't usually read on going stories because I want to read a story from beginning to the end continuously. The feeling of being cliffhanged is really...). But really, I really want to read your stories, especially the "The Vampire Empress: The Blood Queen & Her Kings". The synopsis hooked me but I saw that it's been 10 months since it's last updated. I was just wondering when are you planning to continue it? Anyway, keep it up! You're really great