YellowScarf
The chapters are extremely short, it's honestly, just boring.. other readers could possibly enjoy this story, but it was really putting me to sleep by chapter 9, this is one of the GOT fanfictions that have 30+ chapters on this website but sadly, this is just crap. Everything but writing quality +3 stars.
I Want More ASAP. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
when I see this story first I was interested in it but after reading it my appetite for this story is gone, your Mc is just keep doing stupid thing. the sacking of kings landing event was a glaring point of mc character. he reminds me a teen edgy-ness + a old medieval pope. but this story have potential if you rewrite the story author. just my honest opinion please don't take my criticism to heart like many other author's.
Shameless Author here!!!! Okay, as the author of this novel I, The Shephard invite you to my flock... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's not worth your time since the main character is an ordinary trash who doesn't know anything and really doesn't know anything and all his achievements are just because the author wanted it that way and so the main character of this story has nothing worth nothing before rebirth he didn't know how to have any knowledge and basically in this story he he has such a fat plot Armor that I see this for the first time. And yes, I am not a religious person.
is this story any good ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ come on you word counters.....................................................................................................let me be.