Fred & Garry's Dine-In Service

=====Script Revision Process: 15%===== Essencially, I need to revise a script after getting advice from editors who work with Webnovel & have gotten they're books contracted. I do not plan to get paid nor get said book contracted in any way, and this was meant to be more of an experiment to see if I can come up with any "original" ideas, because "Please Mind the Gap" and "Off Route" were all stolen ideas, or atleast I think that way... Because the concepts revolved around sentient vehicles & even certain pieces of stationary equipment. But the idea was unoriginal because there were many cartoons revolving around such concept, but not with a Science-Fiction Body-Horror Esque aspect to it, so I decieded to write "Fred & Garry's Diner" to attempt to amalgamate every horror story Concept I've developed & try make a more finished product, and note: Unlike other indie animation films (short or long), Fred neither Johnston. Garryison were not characters I've depicted in childhood illustrations.