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Reviews of Forging Empires and the Utopia

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Forging Empires and the Utopia

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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4Akros_Zero

Story and plotline are amazing, will keep you interested for a long time. Updates are stable enough. The only downside is the Bad grammar but well the Author's mother tongue is not English so it's kinda expected. But well I have seen worse English in mtl sites and if you can read them destroying your brain cells just to satiate your Boredom then you should give this fanfic a try. I hope other's understand and don't underrate this Novel. Since Author is giving it for free and despite his bad English he is trying his level best. If too many negative comments come for Author then he might just abandon this Novel so it's better if you guys just ignore the grammar part. If anyone want's to be a translator for Author he/she can contact Author though he/she won't get paid so please keep that in my mind.

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Unsightly
UnsightlyLv1Unsightly

This is a very good fanfic and I love it but the grammar in the early chapters is like someone was choking on something and couldn't see well while writing but other than that its great its a little sus how 90% of authors I see don't have English as their main language

Aayann_
Aayann_Lv13Aayann_

this is the best fan fiction on the Hollywood i really like reading author writing is also very good keep updating. the character are also very good.

UwuCreyo
UwuCreyoLv11UwuCreyo

I just want to say I love the fanfic and I hope you more success thanks for the novel. Fyi I'm not a choosey reader who like to rumble about a fanfic they are reading and act like a boss on a free fanfic.

God_Of_Nihility
God_Of_NihilityLv4God_Of_Nihility

it's really a good story, I'm really enjoying it, don't drop this story,it would be really good if you could upload new chapters everyday 😊

Anup_Kumar_9511
Anup_Kumar_9511Lv1Anup_Kumar_9511

Please update fastπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Šβ˜ΊοΈπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

Ankit_Sharma_4559
Ankit_Sharma_4559Lv1Ankit_Sharma_4559

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UwuCreyo
UwuCreyoLv11UwuCreyo

one of my favorites Hollywood fanfics/novel i hope I'll see more🫢😍

Alex081904
Alex081904Lv13Alex081904

πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’• . . . . . . . . . πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

Flaiver
FlaiverLv4Flaiver

Good story. Just the right thing to read before bed. A novel for fun, no drama or other boring stuff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

anotheridiot
anotheridiotLv13anotheridiot

its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it

Ankit_Sharma_4559
Ankit_Sharma_4559Lv1Ankit_Sharma_4559

Reviewing it once again and I love it beside some grammar everything is awesome πŸ‘ definitely recommend AWESOME GREAT! πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

octoberwind
octoberwindLv4octoberwind

this might not be a all rounder book like im really a superstar but it definitely something new i love it so far the ownly down side is that he does not do like everything like know technology and be a singer but everything else is great thanks

k_l_4014
k_l_4014Lv1k_l_4014

The story and character development with what can be seen is excellent, it has a great future. Besides that it has a stable rise of chapters.

MIR_Sajeeb
MIR_SajeebLv13MIR_Sajeeb

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Asura_4221
Asura_4221Lv2Asura_4221

good story

AStrAl_Soul
AStrAl_SoulLv4AStrAl_Soul

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GodOfGreedAs
GodOfGreedAsAuthorGodOfGreedAs

Hi Readers it's the author here keeping the streak and giving myself a 5-star review frist few chapters are in the slow peace so we warn $$$$$$$$$$$

Takkaza
TakkazaLv4Takkaza

nice story ... .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,...............,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,

Htun_Linn_Ko
Htun_Linn_KoLv13Htun_Linn_Ko

Need more chapters ........................................................................................................................