its perfect as it is but with better editing its gonna be legendary

yes

shut up and take my power stones and add moar chaps.

more i read more i need

its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it

dont forget to add tsunade in his harem

great chapter, now I have to wait for another chapter

what do you mean by another verse like are you going to send him to another world now?

cheers great chapter hope you release more soon.

so no harem or what i would hate it if he is forced to create it

get well soon.... worst case scenario if you meet ROB telll him me ready pick me up....

garrib means poor

the impaler

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