Megan_Immanuella
Awesome,daring,grueling that's how I describe the amazing female lead in this interesting story that the awesome author put forward.Great work the sky is your stepping stone[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Lacks a lot of depth and substance. Decent plot, but the story telling isn't up to par. Descriptions are stiff, and conversations lack any sense of realism. Characters are as cliché as they come, and also very cringe... Punctuation is a big issue... Sentence and paragraph spacing are an even bigger issue. All these problems should be addressed so this book can have a shot at success. Would have given a lower rating, but didn't want to seem mean so; 3.0/5.0