Reviews of Fey in the Dungeon [DanMachi]

good. hope you don't drop this like many authors tend to do. I personally really enjoyed it. her name gets spelt wrong in some parts. but not much of a problem. keep up the good work

Can’t post without giving myself stars so might as well be five 🤷‍♂️ Only wanted to comment that it’ nice being on the other side of the story and writing ahead that I know what’s coming and everyone else has to wait for the one chapter a day release 😜😌

I really like it so far. The grammar is nice, and I like the skyrim system. Keep up the good work, would be a real shame if this got dropped.

I like the gradual disclosure of characters and plot twists. It would be great to see the story continue. Author, thanks for the work ............... ..................... . ....... .....…....

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Interestingly written. I look forward to continuing. Special thanks to the author ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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While there are some grammatical issues, the interactions of the oc and the rest of the characters come through clearly. It is an interesting combination used for the mc’s system/power set, am looking forward to seeing the results. Thank you.

At chapter 17 so far and I need to say that is is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Some elements are lacking but add an explorationary feeling that is not an infodump, good good good. I am looking forward to reading more.

Unnecessarily long paragraphs, little use of periods. I couldn't stand reading after he revealed his reincarnation and the plot objects, but the main problem that made me abandon the story was the text structure and dialogue arrangement.

The story is extremely good although a bit of the grammar is a bit off and now that updates have stopped for an indefinite period of time, I cannot truly give a 5 star review. Still, I hope you can continue as I love this story already and keep up the great work! Have a nice day or night wherever you are!