Marcelly_Cris
I'm ngl I find the female lead very boring and kinda useless. I mean the author gave her god talent in alchemy. But then this is made totally irrelevant by the mc. I mean it is what the mc built his whole strength/cultivation off of. and from his past life he has all the recipes skills etc to make the ability of the female lead pointless. Maybe if it was something different it would be better. Such as formations or something, painting etc anything other than the thing the mc has already reached the top in...
apart from some inconsistencies, this is acceptable. The protagonist doesn't seem to be very cold or manipulative, and also doesn't seem to be very Op from the start. The pace is a little slow for my taste, but ok. I would like more chapters with more information, instead of always talking about just alchemy.