Fate/MARVEL

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actually trash, good concept but trash. really terrible grammar, no context most of the time and it feels like I'm reading a 10 year old's English project.

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If this is called garbage, then people who create other bad fanfic will feel insulted. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

Es una historia interesante sin embargo en lo personal siento que le falta algo pero es buena si quieres algo para entretenerte y pasar el rato leyendo

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Keep going as you're showing consistent improvements in the flow and strength of your chapters. Consider developing a unique and custom antagonist to play as a foil to your MC, especially if they happen to be reoccurring throughout 1 or more arcs.

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