what's up reader, I want to inform you that I will change the way I write this novel and I will re-edit my novel writing from chapter 1
0zymandias have good example for me, There are usually two ways of writing a webnovel fanfic author will use.
Example
Option 1
"Words words"(person)
Option 2
Person said with a cold voice"words words"
I Decided will use Option 2 because some reader say Option 1 it look weird for one character pov to another and for dialog between Illya and Shirou, I will still use Japanese word onii-chan instead of using brother, I've gotten used to that, hihihi
Also for sapphire and ruby Dialog will use this symbol 『 word 』