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F u

l_nimbus

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a_man_in_black
a_man_in_blackLv2a_man_in_black

LitRPG just like I was lookin for? Check! Grammar so good i can actually read the story? Check! BIG STOMPY PALADIN!? CHECK! Sexy but not slutty vampire sidekick? Check! Extra-Dimensional delivery of dildos to the POTUS? BONUS CHECK! Seriously though, give it a read. It hits all the markers i look for in an enjoyable story, and i can't find any flaws in the telling that would cause me to ding it even a part of a star.

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Redmoron
RedmoronLv2Redmoron

Reveal spoiler

Samkatspaws
SamkatspawsLv4Samkatspaws

Nice start, a bit messy though. Depiction of human behavior well implemented. The Story keeps jumping a bit too much for my taste, but the setting makes up for that.

ImBloo
ImBlooLv5ImBloo

Read this one on RR. Welcome, l_nimbus! Also, inkstone lacks formatting options, so you should probably have clearer ways to differentiate the narrations, dialogues, chat room messages, system messages and separate different locations or points of view. Good luck!

Ken_ringdomstory
Ken_ringdomstoryLv1Ken_ringdomstory

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Great litrpg. The right balance and progression to make it something worth while. Easy to binge read but unfortunately dropped by the author if the 9monthd since last update are any indication. Had this story contained a 100 or so chapters, then it would have been worth using my stones all the way to unlock them when they would be inevitably introduced.

Delta_4
Delta_4Lv14Delta_4

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