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Execrated?

"Execrated is a high-octane, no-holds-barred action-thriller page-turner. Straton City is turned upside down when a criminal mastermind unleashes his version of Hell on Earth. Figures of eminence, people with authority, and even the police themselves are not safe from this shadowy figure. The story follows Detective Jane Harlow as she tries to grapple with her demons and uncover the identity of this force of darkness. Can she survive and protect the city she loves? As deception and danger wait at every corner, and a friend is just someone who hasn't betrayed you yet, the table is set—a table for the high-stakes gambit of life and death, of revenge and redemption. Will she be able to save Straton City and the ones she loves, or will she end up just another pawn in this twisted madness unfolding in Straton?"

Cold_1997 · Action
Not enough ratings
18 Chs

The first Clue

Jane's heart was pounding as she raced back towards the precinct, her mind whirling with possibilities. Kobe's voice on the phone had been urgent, tinged with the kind of excitement that only came with a significant breakthrough.

"Talk to me, Kobe," she said into the hands-free device, weaving through traffic with practiced ease. "What's this about a video analyst?"

"Guy's name is Ramirez," Kobe's deep voice rumbled through the speakers. "Been going over the footage we have non-stop for days. Says he's found something big, but he wants to show us in person."

Jane's grip tightened on the steering wheel. "Any hints?"

"Nada. But Jane, I know that tone. Whatever it is, it's good."

She allowed herself a grim smile. After weeks of chasing shadows, they were due for some good news. "I'm five minutes out. Have Ramirez set up in the main conference room. And Kobe?"

"Yeah?"

"Thanks for holding down the fort."

She could almost hear his shrug. "That's what partners are for. Now get your ass here, Harlow. I'm tired of looking at Ramirez's ugly mug."

The call disconnected, and Jane pressed her foot down harder on the accelerator. The city blurred past her windows, a kaleidoscope of lights and motion. But her focus was razor-sharp, fixed on the road ahead and the promise of a new lead.

When she burst into the precinct's main conference room several minutes later, it was to find a scene of controlled chaos. Officers and detectives milled about, their conversations a low, urgent hum. At the center of it all was a slight, bespectacled man Jane recognized as Adrian Ramirez, the department's chief video analyst.

Kobe's bulk loomed beside him, and her partner's face broke into a relieved grin when he spotted her. "About time you showed up," he rumbled. "Ramirez here's about to burst."

Jane strode forward, her eyes locked on the analyst. "What have you got for us?"

Ramirez's eyes were fever-bright behind his glasses. "Detective Harlow, you're going to want to see this. I've been reviewing all available footage of our suspect - the abduction of Leah Dawson, the video from the flash drive, even some CCTV from near the earlier crime scenes."

He turned to the large screen dominating one wall of the room, tapping rapidly at his tablet. "At first glance, there's nothing remarkable about his gait. But when you slow it down, isolate certain frames..."

The screen came to life, showing a grainy image of a man - their killer - walking down a deserted street. Leah Dawson's limp form was slung over his shoulder. Jane felt her jaw clench at the sight, but forced herself to focus on what Ramirez was pointing out.

"Watch his right leg," the analyst said, replaying the clip in slow motion. "See that? There's a slight hitch in his step, almost imperceptible at normal speed."

Jane leaned in, her brow furrowed. Now that Ramirez mentioned it, there was something off about the killer's walk. A tiny hesitation, a fractional delay in the transfer of weight.

"I'm not sure I follow," Kobe said, voicing Jane's own confusion. "What are we looking at here?"

Ramirez's grin was triumphant. "Gentlemen - and Detective Harlow - I believe our suspect has a prosthetic right leg."

A ripple of excitement ran through the assembled officers. Jane felt her pulse quicken. "You're certain?"

"As certain as I can be without a medical examination," Ramirez nodded. "I've cross-referenced his gait with known examples of prosthetic users. The similarities are striking."

He pulled up more footage - their killer ascending stairs, turning a corner, even the horrific video of him with Leah in the abandoned building. In each clip, slowed down and enhanced, that telltale hitch was visible.

"It's subtle," Ramirez explained. "High-end prosthetics these days can mimic natural movement remarkably well. But they're not perfect. Especially not on stairs or uneven terrain."

Jane's mind was racing. This was it - the break they'd been waiting for. A prosthetic leg was distinctive, traceable. It narrowed down their pool of suspects significantly.

"Kobe," she said, her voice thrumming with renewed energy, "I want every medical supplier, prosthetist, and orthopedic clinic in Straton City canvassed. Someone fitted this guy with that leg, and I want to know who."

Her partner was already pulling out his phone. "On it. I'll get uniforms to start compiling a list."

"And cross-reference with veterans' organizations, rehab centers, anyone who might have records on amputees," Jane added. She turned back to Ramirez, her eyes blazing. "Adrian, this is outstanding work. truly. You may have just cracked this case wide open."

The analyst blushed, ducking his head. "Just doing my job, Detective. I hope it helps."

"It will," Jane assured him. She raised her voice, addressing the room at large. "Listen up, everyone! We've got new parameters for our suspect. Male, late thirties to early fifties, approximately six feet tall, right leg amputee. I want this information disseminated to all units, especially our people at Straton General. And I want a list of every person in this city fitting that description on my desk yesterday. Clear?"

A chorus of "Yes, ma'am!" and "On it, Detective!" rang out as the room burst into action. Officers rushed to their assigned tasks with renewed vigor, the energy palpable.

Jane felt a large hand descend on her shoulder and looked up to find Kobe grinning down at her. "Feels good, doesn't it?" he said. "To finally have something solid to go on."

She nodded, allowing herself a small smile. "It does. But we can't lose focus now, Kobe. This is still just a lead, not a conviction."

"Understood." His dark eyes twinkled. "So what do you say we go blow off some steam while the troops do their thing? I hear the gym's free."

Jane arched an eyebrow. "Looking to get your ass handed to you again, Winston?"

"In your dreams, Harlow," he chuckled. "Come on, I'll even let you have first shot."

The precinct's gym was a spartan affair - a few weight machines, a rack of free weights, and a padded area for sparring. At this hour, with most of the force out on the streets or busy with the new lead, it was deserted.

Jane and Kobe changed quickly, Jane into a tank top and tight yoga pants, Kobe into a sleeveless shirt that strained against his muscular frame and loose shorts. They met on the mats, circling each other with the easy familiarity of longtime sparring partners.

"You know," Kobe rumbled, his fists raised in a classic boxer's stance, "one of these days, I'm actually going to tag that pretty face of yours."

Jane's grin was feral. "Keep dreaming, big man. You've got to catch me first."

They began to move, a intricate dance of feints and probes. Jane was light on her feet, bouncing on the balls of her feet, her movements precise and economical. Kobe, in contrast, was a mountain in motion - slower, but with a reach that seemed to span counties.

Jane struck first, a lightning-fast jab that Kobe barely managed to slip. He countered with a looping right hook that whistled past her ear as she ducked under it.

"Getting slow in your old age, partner," she taunted, dancing back out of range.

"I'm like fine wine, Harlow," he shot back. "I only get better with time."

They continued their back-and-forth, neither landing any significant blows but both working up a healthy sweat. Jane's style was all about speed and precision - darting in to deliver a flurry of strikes before Kobe could bring his superior strength to bear, then retreating before he could lock her down.

Kobe, for his part, was patient. He knew from long experience that trying to match Jane's speed was a fool's errand. Instead, he bided his time, looking for openings, opportunities to use his grappling skills.

Several minutes into their bout, he saw his chance. Jane, perhaps growing a touch overconfident, came in just a hair too close on one of her combinations. Kobe's arm shot out like a striking snake, enveloping her in a bear hug.

"Gotcha," he grunted, using his weight to drive her back towards the wall of the gym.

But Jane was ready for him. As her back hit the padded surface, she used it as a springboard, pushing off and driving her knee up towards Kobe's midsection. It wasn't a full-power strike - they were friends, after all - but it was enough to make him loosen his grip with a whoosh of expelled air.

Jane slithered free, immediately creating distance. "You were saying?" she panted, a triumphant glint in her eye.

Kobe shook his head ruefully. "I swear, it's like trying to hold onto a greased eel with you."

They reset, circling once more. This time, it was Kobe who initiated, rushing forward with a double-leg takedown attempt. Jane sprawled hard, sprawling her legs back and using her forearms to posts on Kobe's shoulders, keeping him at bay.

For a moment, they were locked in a stalemate, muscles straining. Then, with a grunt of effort, Jane managed to shuck Kobe off to one side. As he stumbled, trying to regain his balance, she pounced.

A swift kick to the back of Kobe's knee buckled his leg. Before he could recover, Jane had leapt onto his back, her arm snaking around his throat in a rear naked choke. They teetered for a second, Kobe's bulk against Jane's technical prowess, before toppling to the mat.

"Tap or nap, big guy," Jane growled into his ear, tightening her hold.

Kobe's hand slapped the mat twice in rapid succession. Immediately, Jane released him, rolling away and coming up in a ready stance, just in case.

But Kobe simply lay there on his back, chest heaving. "I think," he wheezed, "I'm getting too old for this shit."

Jane collapsed beside him, a wide grin splitting her face. "Nah, you're not old. I'm just that good."

They lay there in companionable silence for a while, both catching their breath. The exertion had done its job; Jane could feel the knots of tension that had been building over the past weeks starting to loosen.

"Hey, Kobe?" she said after a bit.

"Yeah?"

"Thanks. I needed that."

He turned his head to look at her, a smile crinkling the corners of his eyes. "Anytime, partner. Anytime."

Just then, the shrill ring of a cell phone shattered the peaceful moment. Jane scrambled to her feet, snatching up the device from where she'd left it with her clothes.

"Harlow," she barked into the receiver.

The voice on the other end was tense, urgent. Jane's expression hardened as she listened, her knuckles whitening around the phone.

"Understood. We're on our way."