shirohead
Madara indeed. But, it's a retarded one! What do you expect? I honestly read only up to Chapter 3 because I didn't get hooked up even up to that point. It'd be useless for me to force myself read something that I didn't like. So this is what I think for what I've read: 1. The 'Madara' here is supposed to be the Madara from the battle of Shūmatsu no Tani, which means he comes from the time before he becomes the so-called Uchiha no Bōrei. The past conversation he had with Hashirama hinted that he has a change of heart. But, a person's personality can't change in an instant. Things quickly escalated, and I couldn't feel any semblance of Madara anymore. I don't know whether the author doesn't have deep understanding of Madara's character or he purposefully did that for 'originality' purpose, but for it was somehow painful. 2. Writing skill is somewhat average, but the author is definitely better than the worse ones I have seen. Unfortunately, the way he advanced the story seemed all over the place. It's quite understandable, since we're not talking about a professional author here, but I personally would avoid it. 3. The story would be likeable to some, and irritating for some — such as me. But, people have preferences, right? Rather than taking someone's opinion wholly and later mocked them for it, you should have taste for yourself first. Keep scribbling and improving, Author!