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EPSILON ODYSSEY

hello guys newbie writer here , this is my first time writing a novel so plzz if you are reading this novel give honest opinions in the comment section .I would like it if you guys would point out my mistakes . this novel is about 5 people getting Reincarnated in a peaceful magical world. it is a world with magic ,mythical creatures and different races .our mc is one of those lucky people that gets reincarnated ........or are they really lucky ? is the world really peaceful as it claims to be or is there anything hiding in it . find out how our mc along with his friend uncovers the truth

TEMPEST123 · Fantasy
Not enough ratings
14 Chs

NEW WORLD(1)

In a room the painfull shout of a women echoes in the room

Mam! Please hold on for a few more minutes

It hurts!!

Please hold on mam!!

Its done mam the baby is healthy ,look mam,mam?

MAM!! ARE YOU ALL RIGHT

MAM!!

Ohh stop shouting mera I'm not death

(Mera)

Oh plzz don't scare me like that mam

Well it was funny looking at your expression , now plzz give me the baby

(Mera)

Hera

The mother holds the baby in her arms and looks at the baby lovingly

Ah he is so beautiful

(Mera)

Yes he is

Unmmmm.. Mera why is the baby not crying? Is something wrong with my baby

(Mera)

Oh let me check

Mera's eyes glow and she sighs in relief

(Mera)

Don't worry mam there is nothing wrong with the baby

Ohh thank god , but then why is the baby not crying?

(Mera)

I don't know maybe he is a silent type

Oh I see. Silent type huh. Hehe just like my husband

(Mera)

Phhahaha Ya I guess your baby takes after him

The door opens and a man walks in he has red long hair and deep blue eyes he has a warm smile on his face looking at the women holding the baby he walks in front of the women and hugs her lovingly

(Husband)

Thank you dear. For bringing our beautiful son into this world

(Wife)

Yeah I know I'm awesome!!

Hahahaha

(Husband)

Yeah Diana you are the best

Can I hold the baby

(Diana)

Here u go nael

Diana gives the baby to nael

(Nael)

He has your hair Diana

(Diana)

And he has your eyes look that beautiful blue eyes , I'm sure when he grows up he will be a lady killer .I just hope he won't grow up to be a playboy

(Nael)

Don't worry I'm sure he won't we will raise him to become a great warrior

(Diana)

Hey!! Don't go deciding our son's career like that I'm sure he will choose to become a mage instead of becoming a knight . now go me and my baby needs to rest

Nael hands the baby to Diana

(Nael)

OK rest and if you need me I will be in my room

(Diana)

OK

Diana closes her eyes and sleep with her baby in her arms

(Kapong)

Huh why do I feel so tired

And what is that giant hand holding me ... Wait its not that its big its just that I have become smaller why!! How?

Wait I remember I was in the school with my friends and then a strange message came to my phone about reincarnation don't tell me it was true .but how did I die then ? The missile hah ....now what do I do ?

That giant girl is handing me to someone

Wow she is so beautiful her long beautiful blond hair ,her green eyes and fair skin damn she would put the models in my world to shame

Someone came inside the room .of course he is handsome is everyone in this world ridiculously beautiful

Oh so my new mother name is Diana and my fathers name is nael .I hope they give me a cool name

Hmmmnn.... My mother is asleep and the girl called Mira and my mother has left the room now what do I do ?

Well now like I can do anything with this baby body

[Ting]

Woh!!! What the heck!!!