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Endless Spear

The novelfocuses on the character Ian, who is transported to a different world and finds himself in the body of a young man named Nai. He is met by a group of people who are traveling together and who possess extraordinary abilities, including manipulation of the environment and mental barriers. Ian struggles to come to terms with his situation, as he tries to figure out how he got there and if he can find a way to return home. He also faces the suspicion and hostility of the others, who believe he has taken Nai's body by force. The text builds tension and suspense as Ian navigates this unfamiliar world, where his survival is uncertain.

synekdoche · Urban
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14 Chs

hi

Hi, first chapters had more than necessary inner monologue that disturbed the pace, noticed this and fixed in later chapters(went a little overboard with expressing Ian/Nai confusion)

Also first novel, just got inspired from reading my faves. Bound to make mistakes, I know. Well if anyone ever reads this, critiscism to writing structure and such are welcomed.

Let's go, excited(is writer's block this early normal? At ch 11 writing this)