Hear me out and Clear your doubt
Whew, how time flies, eh? First things first, this story has romance. I give time to other characters to grow, not only Jack. Since I haven't received any feedback, I would say I have been doing a pretty good job so far. Lastly, there is still comedy, but I removed the parody aspect somewhat. It means I won't wave my hand when it comes to the big baddie and say he was defeated by slipping down the stairs or something.
No smut. There are children reading this (Maybe?). That's about it. Don't forget to share your thoughts with me, though. I appreciate it if it's constructive, and not just a spam comment either praising me or wishing I would just jump off a bridge.
since it's my first story i'm afraid of jumping down that way, i'll rather avoid the whole Love drama that i know will be there if i were to choose one girl as the Fl or everyone. please let me know what you all think on the comments.
Edit: I have learned enough since then to know this was cowardly, if i want romance in my story i should just go ahead with it, so there is that.
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