KayKaylonie
One of the best stories I've read here. The chapters are well written, the characters, really fleshed out. You get a real feel for the personality of the MC and his brother. The magic system is intriguing and perfectly detailed, it's a hard magic system, for those who like that (like me) The pictures constructed in my mind through the author's expert story telling are vivid. It's like a movie playing out in my head. So far so brilliant. I look forward to your updates