The reason I deleted ch 5

Hello everyone, Rzxs here. I wanted to give you an update regarding Chapter 5, "The Tarnish From Beyond." I had to delete it due to a significant plot hole.

Here's the issue:

Marika's rule is described by Ymir as corrupt. Ymir says, "The arrogance of a world built on the tree of the earth, the follies of men, their bitter suffering, is there no hope for salvation? Unfortunately, the answer is clear… fragmented and flawed from the start, Marika and the fingers that guided her." Ymir's description that the roots were corrupt from the beginning refers to Marika's rule being based on an illusion and that the Two Fingers were never the messengers of the Greater Will from the start. Communication with the Greater Will was cut off long before Marika's rule. The Two Fingers claimed to respond to heavenly messages, which was a shock in itself. The Golden Order is built on an illusory rule, human ambitions, and an endless chain of revenge far from divine intervention. If the Two Fingers responded to Marika's madness, then what do the Three Fingers represent to us?

The problem arises in Chapter 5, where I used the Greater Will to transfer Rhaenys (the Tarnished) from another world that has the Elden Ring game. This implies that she knows everything about the game. However, why would the Greater Will care about Azeroth when it doesn't concern itself with Marika and the Lands Between? This creates a significant plot hole.

Therefore, Chapter 5 cannot be published in its current form. I will be reworking this chapter and replanning my approach to the novel, which will take some time. Please be patient🙏🙏.

Thank you for your understanding,

Rzxs

Also I fucking hate miyazaki