Reviews of Eden: Surviving an Apocalypse World

My first time writing, so expect some mistakes, spelling mistakes, and little plot holes. Please leave a paragraph comment, chapter comment, and reviews on the book. Critics are allowed. Thanks.

Pretty good book so far. It's quite generic and I hope that changes. The thing I like most is that you are trying to show us their emotions instead of telling us. Keep up the good work.

This is a good novel, with a nice system and although I don't really like many of the characters they are well written. One thing I dislike is how the mc is so willing to share his rewards with others, despite receiving nothing back from it, such as when he received a book on magic knowledge and almost instantly gave it to the character shown to be the most scheemeing and least trustful. Such things make me really dislike the mc, but hopefully he will grow out of doing such things.