Reviews of DxD: Cuhullin Astaroth, The Bastard Of Three Bloodlines

Gr8 read till now, some suggestions take them if you like otherwise Ignore, Personally I felt your chapter lengths to be a little inconsistent. I repeat 'I felt', so it may not be true. Secondly don't write paragraphs, as most of your explanation part is written in paragraphs which is a little unsightly or not readable in the more appropriate terms, so do try to split those massive paragraphs into small parts, and other than that, don't do polls and things, do what you like, as in future there is a possibility to face difficulties while writing chapters just because you wrote something that other's wanted instead what you thought of initially, I am saying these because I have seen some author's struggle on such cases and ultimately making them drop the fic. To conclude good plot so far.