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Review Detail of Krishnbarad in DxD: Cuhullin Astaroth, The Bastard Of Three Bloodlines

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Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv42yrKrishnbarad

Gr8 read till now, some suggestions take them if you like otherwise Ignore, Personally I felt your chapter lengths to be a little inconsistent. I repeat 'I felt', so it may not be true. Secondly don't write paragraphs, as most of your explanation part is written in paragraphs which is a little unsightly or not readable in the more appropriate terms, so do try to split those massive paragraphs into small parts, and other than that, don't do polls and things, do what you like, as in future there is a possibility to face difficulties while writing chapters just because you wrote something that other's wanted instead what you thought of initially, I am saying these because I have seen some author's struggle on such cases and ultimately making them drop the fic. To conclude good plot so far.

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DxD: Cuhullin Astaroth, The Bastard Of Three Bloodlines

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Reinhardt001Z
Reinhardt001ZAuthorReinhardt001Z

For the most part I'm limiting the damage that the polls can do by inserting characters I have at least 50% of an idea to introduce. But my thanks for the review

Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv4Krishnbarad

that's great đŸ‘đŸ» and sorry If you found Anything offensive to you, I was merely thinking that it would have been a pity if a good fic was dropped just because readers f*cked up the plot for their own fantasies.

Reinhardt001Z:For the most part I'm limiting the damage that the polls can do by inserting characters I have at least 50% of an idea to introduce. But my thanks for the review
Reinhardt001Z
Reinhardt001ZAuthorReinhardt001Z

Don't worry I've seen two authors butt heads so bad one threatened legal action. But for me this is just a relaxation method. I'm on the road constantly or flying constantly so it passes time. As long as a review or comment isn't too obscene or unoriginal I don't it

Krishnbarad:that's great đŸ‘đŸ» and sorry If you found Anything offensive to you, I was merely thinking that it would have been a pity if a good fic was dropped just because readers f*cked up the plot for their own fantasies.
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Reinhardt001ZAuthorReinhardt001Z

*mind

Reinhardt001Z:Don't worry I've seen two authors butt heads so bad one threatened legal action. But for me this is just a relaxation method. I'm on the road constantly or flying constantly so it passes time. As long as a review or comment isn't too obscene or unoriginal I don't it