Monster_Paradise
Is the abandon or what haven't update in a while, cause it would be really disappointing if it was, here hoping it just on a very long hiatus??? ๐๐. The work is great, need to speed up the plot s little but overall this is not a bad to story to read. It focus a little too much in world building and causing it to neglect the theme of the story but overall the story is great and would really hate to see it abandon.
the story is good and solid, it has one or two details but not relevant. the protagonist was well built but his progression is very slow, it can be a problem for someone. The world itself was not much worked on but what was shown was good and even surprising. The story has its clichรฉs, although it took a long time to appear, but they are not bad and end up causing even a good expectation. The only real complaint I have is about the author who does not keep the posting frequency very much and does not answer questions related to it.
I first started to read this novel awhile back, I was reading it while it was still updateing. I recently started to read this novel again, the story development is slow and isn't very interesting, I tryed to get past the parts that bothered me but the story is centered around a boring person with an awful personality. At fist I really liked the idea but the way the auther words the novel brothers me, he writes everything in the annoyingly negitive perspective of the character, because of this I often get annoyed and cringe at the attempts of the character acting "cool". overall it's a good idea but not done well, if the auther could rewrite the entire thing and focus on the quality it whould be better.
I think it was droped. because our author said 2 months ago that he will continue this after he finished the dragon ball thing that he is writing on that time. but he started a new story about pokemon I think he dont care about what we readers feel for this good novel to be dropped. Well it was a good read.