TheDemonic
What more can I say?! this is truly a captivating and interesting book to read. Cool characters, nice grammars with fewer or no mistakes. As your first book, I'm impressed and I hope you keep writing, don't feel down or discouraged by the fewer views...it is a great book so give it your all. do not let anything discourage you at all.
This is a good novel. It's not bad by any means. However, the grammar makes the book difficult to read at times, and the sentence structure is really poor at points. The protagonist is fine, and plot, while uninteresting to me, isn't terrible. The author's descriptive ability is excellent, and despite the issues I have with this novel, I did enjoy reading it. 3.8/5
Now, what should I say about this? - the first chapter, I cried! - the second chapter had me like dayummmm! - the third chapter had me excited af! It's an excellent book with a great story. Author-san, you had me curious about the mc so bad. Loving your book; keep up the excellent work! I hope your account works well. I love the story!