Some Notes

So this will be my first story i ever write, i want criticism but it should be constructive and please be nice, I'm only human, I'm not talented and don't handle failure well, so once again, I'm only human.

Next point, if there is something that needs to be revisited or you want the story to go instead, point it out, if I like the idea, I'll roll with it and it will appear within the next few chapters, if not, please don't spam the idea, its fine to ask again every so often, I'll say whats going on with updates after... 10 chapters, if you want it more frequent, less, let me know, and I'll do my best.

Last point, I might have got the age rating wrong, if I did, I'm sorry, there will be mature language and maybe some disturbing descriptions(like sexual content) I'm not sure yet.

I'm done rambling, I'll be starting this story within the next few months, hope everyone enjoys.