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Writing and grammar is good but its too early decide if the story itself is good. I'm still waiting to see how this connects to KKKB outside the OC's backstory. My impressions of the story so far is that it feels like the intent is to one-up and add more "serious" elements to the original. But again I feel that its too early to gauge and judge this story with so little to work with at the moment.
This is an excellent light read! Since it is set in a "world of bears" it does not have to be serious, and if a few cliche type instances occur revolving around teaching arrogant nobles to treat others considerately a few more times than the author intended, the story is still fun! Do not drop this story! Dragons & Bears surprisingly mix quite well!