This is stupid.
Your writing is great and your power selection fots the mc but because you made changes with the story just to fit your grandiose belief on the Mc's power, everything went to ****.
First, you split them up just because the elder has something to say. Are you really right in your brain? Why the **** would they do that? They're still going to the same spot. What would 5 minutes do to their journey?! You just needed an excuse to make ieyasu and sayo to die.
Second, tatsumi is stupid but not because he's an airhead but because he was innocent in the beginning of the story but you made him to be a total airhead who can't even think for himself just to make the mc seem smarter than everyone.
Third, just to show that the mc is stronger, you decided to make akame attack the mc just because she finds him dangerous. Hello?? Knock knock?? Are you stupid? They're assasins. All of them are dangerous. And the mc is obviously killing the empire's guards thereby helping akame but to your logic he's interfering with their mission. Then the genius mine and the disciplined bulat even helped akame of her ridiculous claims. Simply stupid.
Fourth, you made ieyasu die but not sayo? Is this sexist or what. In the original sayo died long before ieyasu you stupid author who only think with your cock. And before you spout your fucking nonsense that the story was changed, read carefully on your material. Sayo was tortured and poisoned while ieyasu was being tortured too. It means she should have been dead long before ieyasu. If you wanted ieyasu to dies then sayo needed to die too. Stupid.
Last not because it's the last stupid thing you did but because I can't bear to read this anymore, you basically dumbed down everyone just to fit the story you want to make. Seriously? You made him want to join Night Raid? Even though they tried to stop you from saving ieyasu and sayo? Fuck! Really? Just because you want him to be close to main storyline, you made him want to join them? Just because it's logical? You basically told everyone how he care a lot about ieyasu and sayo and now you want him to join the bunch of imbeciles that tried to stop the mc in helping them? I thought you made him to be smart? Not another imbecile like you. Fuck!
I'm normally a calm person but ****!! This novel! You can just make your own novel with your talent but because you things to go your way you defiled a great manga just because you want to show your readers how more powerful the mc is from the original cast.
All in all,
Respect the source material.
It's ridiculous to make a fanfic if you can't even respect the source material for what it is.