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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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#DRAGON

Recognition (108)

Queen Vegeta's eyes snapped open.

A warm stream of air softly diffused into her lungs, the smaller mask supplying her body with energy in the regeneration chamber.

Her eyes scanned the room she was in, seeing a tall white-tiled architecture.

'What happened?' she thought, gripping her head, trying to soothe a mild headache that formed.

'Ack!'

Her memories came back to her.

'Broly!'

Queen Vegeta rose out of the healing pod, climbing out of the top and soundlessly jumping down.

She grabbed a towel and dried herself before wearing the red clothes on the hangar and stormed out of the bathroom.

'Ever since I came here I've been acting like a bumbling teenager, it's time a remember who I am!' she thought to herself assuredly.

She burst into Broly's room where he was sitting at his desk, a whole sandwich hanging out of his mouth as he typed.

'The Queen of all Saiyans'

Broly's tail swished around to his face, gripping the sandwich and holding it in the air.

"You're finally awake! Are you feeling-"

"What's wrong with you?"

Broly was taken aback.

"What do you mean?"

"Why didn't you help us back on Planet Vegeta?" Queen Vegeta said, her tone icy cold.

Broly's eyes narrowed.

"Well, for one thing, the planet I grew up on banned Space Travel, I being the only exception in their recent history. Secondly, I only built my ship around a year ago and my reports say that Planet Vegeta was destroyed over ten years ago. And lastly, I had no idea of the exact location of the place before you told me so there was no way for me to get there. Is that good enough for you?" Broly snapped back, systematically debunking Queen Vegeta's quarrel.

He knew that having this type of conversation was nigh impossible with the emotional instability that came with the Super Saiyan transformation, nonetheless the first one, and was only comfortable saying all this now that Queen Vegeta was in her base.

It wasn't necessarily her fault that she didn't know but she did nothing to help her case.

Queen Vegeta's eyes relaxed but her scowl remained.

"I suppose there was nothing you could but that still doesn't change the matter at hand," Queen Vegeta said bitterly, realising that she was undeniably in the wrong.

"And what would that be?" Broly said, moving his eyes back to his work, off-put by Queen Vegeta's attitude.

"We're going to kill Freiza," Queen Vegeta said harshly.

Broly scoffed.

"Not like that you're not," he said cynically.

"What do you mean? Are you a Saiyan at all? How can you-"

FSH!

Broly shifted his tail, allowing his sandwich to wriggle further down his length and he fired a thin ki beam from the top at Queen Vegeta's left leg.

Upon impact, Queen Vegeta felt weak and hit the ground awkwardly, stumbling over.

"Your injuries are serious, wait a few days so you can fully recover, then we talk about sieging Freiza," Broly said, typing on his keyboard focused.

Queen Vegeta's face screwed even tighter.

"You're a disappointment," she said, getting to her feet and leaving his room.

A small smile formed on Broly's face.

'I would have given her a much harder time if she hadn't been alone for 12 years, when she realises how much I've done for her, I'd been interested to see her reaction, it also helps that she's pretty' he thought, tiredly.

Queen Vegeta had been unconscious for about a week and in that time Broly had managed to analyse and archive the data on the ki crystals. When consulting Mr Yellow and his supercomputer they were able to powderise the crystal and somehow produced ki-based clothing with it.

Broly got the impression that after Queen Vegeta's tantrum she wouldn't want to be wearing his clothes anymore.

'Now on to the important part'

Broly had recently been following up on the data that Frieza's spaceships had given him and uncovered a lot about Frieza's operation.

The Frieza Force, also known as the Planetary Trade Organisation, was essentially an intergalactic army that sieged and pillaged planets and sold them to wealthy individuals on weaker planets for profit.

On the surface, this was their ideology but Broly could tell, especially due to the warriors that were stationed on the wealthy planets, that their real goal was to secretly control everything from the shadows, in an attempt to monopolise the entire universe.

The Frieza Force would be paid in either men or technology and they more or less gathered intelligence on every planet they could before completely exterminating the population. They used the Saiyans to do this for the most part and after their genocide, their rate of production drastically decreased before somewhat stabilising again.

The Frieza Force kept a strict record of the actions of every high-class group within itself. Broly was able to determine that a group called the 'Ginyu Force' were responsible for the vast majority of noteworthy planets that were kept in the Frieza Force database.

The technology used by the Frieza Force was also nothing to scoff at, Broly saw armies of heavily modified cyborg warriors, the grunts of Frieza's army given bionic limbs that helped them walk again and fight again.

Yet all of this was used to murder hundreds and thousands of innocents.

Broly nearly vomited as he saw the scenes of devastation, mountains of dead bodies, thousands of times more severe and excessive than the scenes on Planet Mentels.

"He has to die"

This was the only conclusion Broly came to.

Frieza was a heartless demon that rampaged through the universe and soured everything he touched, letting him continue to do as he pleased would bring calamity to everyone else in the universe.

'And to think this was what my people had to endure'

The thought of Frieza laying hands on his people made him sick, he now understood why Queen Vegeta was so upset with his slower response to the genocide of the Saiyans.

'But he surely has to be stronger than that'

The number in the database for Frieza's power level was widely stated to be 530,000 but this number was simply too low for him to be ravaging the universe without resistance.

'He's definitely hiding something'

Now to Broly, the next action had never been so clear in his life.

He had to train his hardest so he could beat Frieza into the dirt.

The chapters are already written so it wasn't as bad as I thought, I hope you can see what's going on here.

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