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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Provoking Unseen Power (142)

"Huh?"

Broly felt the area around him become numb, his feelings of ki and body mysteriously erased.

He sunk to the ground like a stone in water.

'I can't feel anything!' Broly cried mentally, even his tongue too stiff to move.

'King Cold was putting ki in your body with every tail swipe, I was too busy coaching your movements to realise, I'm extending my will in your stead, I'll try to remove it as quickly as can,' Yami said cooly, examining Broly's body and ordering his ki to combat the foreign energy inside him.

King Cold cackled maniacally as he flew slowly towards the ground, actually scaring Broly.

'It's already spread all over, I can force it out of two limbs at a time, but not all of them, it keeps diffusing to other parts'

'Free my arms,' Broly said quickly.

Yami complied and Broly felt the numbness in his legs and face intensify but under the command of his will, his arm muscles spasmed, blood pouring from the cuts and strained, allowing Broly to enter a handstand position.

'Free my legs!' Broly thought urgently, pushing his body up into the air.

He landed on his feet with some effort, his legs heaving and buckling under his weight, they didn't struggle this much under 200x gravity.

"How the fuck are you still standing!?" King Cold said, looking at Broly with mild awe.

No response.

King Cold stared at Broly before chuckling, realising the paralysis had spread to his face and prevented him from talking.

"What a clever little monkey you are!"

Broly wanted to be angry badly but was overcome with a huge sense of panic, realising that even in his Super Saiyan Wrath state he could barely move, walking with extreme effort.

"Broly, the peculiar monkey that was born with a power level of ten thousand"

'He knows who I am?'

"His father, Paragus, escaped Planet Vegeta with his son, Celery, Mushro and Aspa to an 'unknown location' northeast of Planet Vegeta"

Broly's sense of unease grew, listening to King Cold's words involuntarily.

"His mother, Olivia, died on an induction mission just after he was born, a tragic turn of events indeed," King Cold softly before laughing hysterically.

'How does he know all this?'

Yami remained silent, not liking where this was going.

King Cold's laughter mellowed into chuckles, taking small steps towards Broly who felt his knees buckle and muscles spasm when he saw his looming figure.

"Being the emperor of the universe is tiring, too many things to do and people to keep in check, so I handed it down to my youngest son Frieza," King Cold narrated.

"But I still found myself bored! What could I possibly do to pass the time?" he asked rhetorically.

"I simply got some of my men, awfully intelligent scientific fellows, to switch around the Planets and neglect to provide certain information for my favourite monkeys, watching them suffer became a cherished pastime of mine," he said wickedly, looking down on Broly.

'Don't tell me...'

"I was the reason why your mother died, I am the reason why you are going to die and I will be the reason why your father will die," he said approaching Broly with his fist raised.

'Uh oh'

Broly closed his eyes, processing the information carefully.

"Planet Sythis, right?" King Cold whispered before cackling villainously.

'Yep, that'll do it'

WSSHHH!

King Cold disappeared, suddenly moving several miles away from Broly as a precaution watching Broly with palpable amusement.

A dense, thick, powerful green aura rose around Broly, the energy exploding in size in less than a second, crowning Broly with a ki signature that covered the entire planet, King Cold using his own energy to resist the pressure.

Broly's eyes screwed shut, his mouth firmly closed as he relaxed his body, using his Legendary ki that had miraculously doubled in quality, eviscerating the strongholds of malicious energy in seconds, doing what took him a minute to do before in a millisecond.

'Control your anger, don't let go of it but control your anger,' Yami said softly, his words echoing like a mantra.

'Tch!'

Broly's teeth grit against each other as his temper raised, unable to contain his raging anger.

"GRAAAAAAAAAAH!"

The air around Broly harshened before bursting away from his body, pushing his aura outwards over all of the planet, a vast section that lasted miles breaking under it.

Broly breathed in and out, feeling his ki erupt inside him and focused on limiting them back to their pathways, forcing them to move horrendously fast.

'Ah shit, here we go again,' Yami chuckled wryly, feeling his consciousness fade.

Broly's aura declined, soaking back into his body like a sponge but outlining him with unstable explosive power. His will worked hard to ensure that there was no strain on his body and his and blood vessels contracted, realising the stress from the wrath state.

Broly breathed in and out again, controlling himself as he raised his head, his bright yellow eyes coming to focus and he locked his sight on King Cold. The anger he had subdued in his chest, flaring up again when he saw his monstrous figure, his matching blonde hair increasing in length significantly before fluttering green and falling down, pushing sideways.

'He's already dead,' Broly assured himself as he resisted his urges.

Broly levitated as his eyes glowed with bright green energy, healing all of his wounds with mild pain, scars forming at rates that would be missed if you blinked,

King Cold watched Broly metamorph with his eyes wide open, not quite believing what he was seeing.

He then chuckled, allowing his own ki to rise and flare surrounding his body.

"Did I upset you?" he said sarcastically.

Broly didn't shout again, instead laughed mockingly which provoked fear into the heart of King Cold, causing his eyes to narrow and his steps to falter.

Broly smiled widely, showing his teeth as he took slow steps towards King Cold who looked back at him terrified.

"I-I will show you the true power of a Frost Demon!"

King Cold's energy bubbled over his form, causing a unique occurrence to take place. Somehow, all of King Cold's body turned a soft brown colour, completely contradicting his wicked and villainous nature.

"Behold! King Bronze!"

Broly looked over King Cold and smirked.

'I'm going to hang his tail next to Frieza's'

"You said your power level was pretty big right?"

"And?" King Cold said cautiously.

"Well, my power level is MASSIVER!"

Broly's body came to life, a soft-coloured barrier thrumming around him that spewed Eraser Cannons like ordinary ki blasts, flying by the hundred in every direction with no indication of stopping.

King Cold stretched out one finger and zapped quickly and carefully, piercing the orbs and causing them to explode ferociously, tearing up the ground and filling the air with green smoke.

Broly lept out of the fog at frightening speed, launching forward and embedding a firm fist against King Cold's face, forcing him back and causing large tracts to form in the ground.

"You are no match for the Legendary Super Saiyan! Concede your life!"

King Cold smirked.

"Come at me! You filthy monkey!"

I know

I know

King Cold is much stronger than he is in the cannon but I thought his potential was kind of wasted so instead I did a different thing.

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