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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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More Than A Few Problems (8)

The Tuffles were not all wiped out on Planet Vegeta.

The Tuffles, also known as Tsufurians, were arguably the most technological race in existence. They made countless scientific breakthroughs and advancements before other races could count. With this type of uncommon intelligence, they had enough foresight to realise relatively early that the Saiyan's strength could not be reached by their mutant machines in the given timeframe. This meant that King Appa the Second, the former Tuffle King devised a plan. Himself as well as all the Tuffles over the age of 40 would stay on Planet Plant and bitterly fight to the death with the Saiyans. If they won, they would go to Planet Sythis and bring back the younger Tuffles and if they failed, the younger generation would live in their stead.

The Tuffle King Appa the Second, refused to let the older generation flee from Planet Plant because if the worst-case scenario occurred and the Saiyans found the Tuffles again, he feared their race would not survive. At the very least, if the elders died, the dimwitted Saiyans would not actively search the Universe in order to find the Tuffles so they could rest easy. Naturally, King Appa, the Second did not let the Tuffles leave empty-handed, passing on all valuable biological samples as well as books containing all relevant and advanced research the Tuffles had been developing since their conception. As a result, the Tuffles not wanting to be put in the same position again the Tuffles had prepared countless counter-measures for giant creatures who could potentially destroy them.

Since the mass-migration, Tuffle science temporarily delved into biological warfare as well as technological combat. Needless to say, they were more than capable of defending themselves against the five giant monkeys.

Plan Giant-Slayer H was to release Hatchiyak, a mutant machine developed hundrends of years ago. As there were centuries of peace, the Tuffles who were innately peaceful did not continue to develop war machines. Most of the Tuffles that were alive did not inherit their parents' hatred of Saiyans and as a result, the previous conflict before was water under the bridge.

This was until Saiyans appeared on their home-turf in their giant monkey form, destroying their forest. After thousands of years passed, the war between Saiyans and Tuffles became Legend, a period of time that was so far away it was difficult to picture and as time passed the relevance of the legend decreased. All of this caused the current Tuffle Queen, Queen Nana the Third to be confuzzled at the appearance of the Saiyans. However, she wasn't worried as she had much faith in Hatchiyak who was a sentient AI that made continuous battle enhancements without Tsufurian input.

Hatchiyak was a 7-foot mutant machine made of Kirite and Kachin. Its actions were controlled by a massive supercomputer deep underground the Tuffle City. Kirite was a metal native to Planet Sythis that radiated Ki, after a few centuries in development the Tuffles learned how to optimise it, updating the former war machine. It had thick arms and legs encased in red metal, many oval-shaped gems in its body and a pink gooey midsection that parted to reveal a grey elastic metal.

Hatchiyak scanned the forest, huge trees being snapped like toothpicks under the aggressive and random rampage caused by the Giant Apes. Hatchiyak realised that the Apes while similar were not the same, there was a small one being maybe sixteen or seventeen feet in size with larger hands and feet, two twenty-foot apes- one much slender and faster the other much louder and angrier, one twenty one-foot ape and finally a twenty-five-foot ape with similarly large hands and feet with a low ki aura around it.

"Scanning Power Levels..... 120,000, 130,534, 143,012, 189,900, 210,200," Hatchiyak thought, sending information to and from the supercomputer at immeasurable speeds.

"Determining Plan of Action..... Targets are capturable, commencing non-lethal assault," Hatchiyak said finally.

Hatchiyak flew, blue jets of ki flowing from its feet propelling it forward.

"ROOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!" The apes growled violently in unison.

"Initiating Enhanced Gravity Field!" Hatchiyak declared heroically. Hatchiyak flew around the apes releasing strange capsules that on contact revealed four identical devices.

"Activating Enhanced Gravity Field!" Hatchiyak declared.

The Tuffles in the first place were able to survive on Planet Sythis due to their anti-gravity technology so it didn't take long for them to go in the other direction and conquer that science as well.

BOOM!

The ground crumbled underneath the Oozarus, who stumbled quickly as they bitterly tried to resist the force pressing them down.

Let it be known that the current gravity on Planet Sythis was four times greater than Planet Vegeta without the gravity field, with it it was eight times stronger.

"ROOOOOOOOOOAAAAARRRRR," Celery in her Oozaru form was the first to screech, resisting the gravity gradually increasing her movement from small steps to rampageous jumping.

"Noting, Apes seems to be adapting to harsher gravity... initiating subjugation plan!" Hatchiyak declared flying towards the yelling Oozaru.

PEW!

From its arm emerged a missile that fell apart to reveal a needle that embedded itself in the Ape's chest.

PEW! PEW! PEW!

Hatchiyak similarly did the same to the other Oozarus beside the smallest one who struggled to raise its hed.

"R-R-Roooooooarrrrrr" The Apes tried to yell but the sedative was taking effect, causing them to lose vigour and strength barely stopping them from falling to the ground.

"Increasing Gravity Field!" Hatchiyak declared. This ranged method that resolved the conflict resulted in a 0% probability of Hatchiyak being injured or harmed, so it opted for this route. The gravity changed from 2 times to 5 times.

BOOM! BOOM!

The two twenty-foot apes fell finally reaching their limits and crumbled down to the ground - flattening multiple sections of the forest, however, the Twenty-Five foot Ape and the Twenty-One-foot ape stood defiantly.

"ROOOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR!!" The apes stood ignorantly, roaring beckoning its kin to stand as well.

"ROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!" The sixteen-foot Oozaru as if in response, began to stand unbendingly and roared back.

Hatchiyak considered his options, he detected a power level increase indicating that they had gotten stronger and the remaining sedatives would not have the necessary dosage to completely overwhelm the Oozarus, it also did not want to go too close as it had some other ranged options it could try instead which would have a 0% possibility in sustaining injuries.

Hatchiyak decisively shot a ki blast at the biggest Oozaru, who in return charged at it. Hatchiyak flew high into the sky where the Oozaru could not reach and shot multiple ki blasts at the Oozaru, peppering it with injuries. The Oozaru infuriated by this, gathered it ki at its mouth.

The other standing Oozarus started rampaging, turning what was once a quiet and serene forest into an apocalyptic wasteland.

"ROOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!!!!!!" The Oozaru with a mighty shout fired a wide ki beam at Hatchiyak who dodged at the last second.

Upset that it missed its target, the Oozaru shot an even wider beam that followed Hatchiytak who with years of martial arts theory downloaded, began to dodge masterfully and unpredictable in a way only a robot could.

The Oozaru was further maddened by this but did not have the energy to continue its rampage, Paragus had not eaten and therefore the Oozaru submitted to gravity and fell down. Mushro in his Ooozaru form barely managed to resist the gravity, upon facing a frontal assault from Hatchiyak it shortly fell to the floor.

Hatchiyak now paid attention to the remaining Oozaru.

I don't know if this chapter was well explained if anything is unclear, please comment.

Thank you for reading

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