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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Greater Science (131)

"So let me get this straight, you found an alien compound on another Planet that is capable of converting ki into various energy sources and you brought over a thousand samples for us to study?" Dr Limiter said, not believing the bag of capsule cubes in his doorway.

"Yes sir," Broly said politely.

"Have I ever told you that I love you?" Dr Limiter said, retrieving the bag of capsule cubes that floated into his office.

Broly chuckled.

"No sir," Broly said smiling.

"And I guess you haven't turned 18 yet, meaning, you haven't opened my present," Dr Limiter said sighing out.

"No sir," Broly said respectfully.

"Well to hell with it, I gifted you the formula to create a solution that would help accentuate your Saiyan biology," he said slowly.

Broly squinted.

"You gifted me a steroid?" he said, worrying that his muscles would get too big, stroking them with care.

"More like a vaccine or should I say a super vaccine that increases a bunch of the bodily functions, in fact, it should work with other races as well, it's just a shame the tsufurian body is too feeble to handle it," Dr Limiter said hobbling over to his desk.

"But the science has changed, the research of a particular fellow was leaked and so the formula for the supposed 'Super Soldier Serum' has gone viral, I managed to scale it so that for anyone who's not a Saiyan, it'll act as a deadly poison, I wanted you to finish growing but....."

He cast his eyes back to Broly who had to speak through a device because he couldn't fit through the doorway.

"I think you've finished growing," he said sardonically.

"Thank you, sir," Broly said genuinely.

"Thank you Broly, we'll get back to you in a few days, no doubt with an even further upgraded armour, sword and ship speck patched for you," Dr Limiter said, already calling several members of his team.

Broly blinked, not knowing how the Tuffles were aware of his crystal gear, however, he smiled knowing they would only help him out.

He didn't spare more words and shortly departed, taking off into the air.

'So what now?' Yami questioned, wanting to know Broly's decision since he had met up with his family.

'I want to go back and clean up some of the mess Frieza has caused, although he's dead not all of his army knows that yet and is still oppressing others in his name,' Broly responded, his eyes glowing with righteousness.

'You'd think that after all this time they would be some kind of space police that goes to sort these things out,' Yami said expectantly, trying to remember a particular organisation.

'Are you taking bubble butt with you?'

Broly smirked.

'Hopefully,' he said, landing in front of the Saiyan complex.

He stretched out his muscles which periodically seemed to be tight, forcing him to take up yoga and tend to them multiple times a day.

'As scary as it sounds, you're entering your optimal state, Saiyans stay in their prime for around 60 years, probably 80 for you and in that state your body will find it much easier to grow, that's why Hanasia looks so young even though she's nearly double your age and why she could grow so quickly'

'There's a cap when you're younger?'

'There's supposed to be, kids aren't built to hold a high amount of power but you're an exception to every rule in the book so common sense doesn't apply,' Yami said, involuntarily praising him.

'How much stronger can I get?' Broly thought, looking at his palms with anticipation.

The idea was very alluring but even Frieza, a huge mountain in front of the other Saiyans was smashed to pieces with little to no sign of loss.

Surely there was a limit eventually, right?

"Broly!"

Hanasia seemingly came out of nowhere, clinging strongly to his sizable back and breathing in his unique smell.

Broly brushed his hand through her hair.

"I missed you a lot," he said, his deep voice making his words sound much more forward than he intended.

"I-I've been doing some thinking," she said, breaking off from him holding his hand while looking into his eyes.

"I want to stay here," she said, her face elegant and dignified as she spoke.

'That's not good,' Yami said, stating the obvious.

"After so much time alone, I really felt alive when I was with you and your family, I want to settle down over here," she said, her tone soft and gentle, contrasting her hulkish body.

Broly sighed slightly but didn't waste time.

"That's fine, we can-"

"No, I have to let you go and do your own thing, you're too young to stay cooped on this planet with me and the others, you have to go on your own," she said strongly, her eyes watering slightly as she spoke.

She didn't want to be selfish, especially after everything Broly had done for her she couldn't ask him to not have his own life and stay with her.

"It doesn't have to be like that, I don't mind-"

"I'm serious," she said, tears rolling down her cheek.

"You have to go on your own, if you stay I won't be with you anymore," she said seriously her eyes determined.

"Hanasia..."

Her heart nearly stopped as he heard her say her name.

"I'll do it," she said, her voice firm.

"I...I understand," Broly said, his face going slightly dark.

Broly exhaled sharply as he picked her up.

"W-What are you doing?"

"If I'm going to leave, I need to make up for lost time, I going to leave you with something to remember me by," Broly said, his eyes stretching forward.

(Several Hours Later)

Soft grunts came out from Broly's room, the two lovers were unable to fully enjoy themselves as they realised this would be their last time for a while.

'This is the room he grew up in? He's so young but so...'

"Mffffff," she moaned softly in his ear, feeling him stiffen inside her.

"I love you," Broly said again, making her squeeze on him.

"Don't make this harder than it needs to be," Hanasia said, feeling her will waiver.

"You know if you asked me to I would stay with you forever," he said whispering back to her, combining his words with movements to coax her.

'I know you would, that's why I can't do that to you,' she thought, biting her lip.

"You have to live your own life! I've seen everything I want to see in the universe but you still have places to go and people to help, I can't with good conscious hold you back," she said, nibbling on his ear and rubbing his back after she spoke.

'It seems all of those morals you had actually rubbed off on her, you've turned the Queen of Savages into another Paragon of virtue,' Yami said sardonically.

"If that's what you want..."

Broly flipped her onto his bed, pinning her down with both his arms and forced her to stare at him in his eyes, making her redden.

"I have to make you mine before I leave," he said determinedly.

"Broly..."

Last Sex Scene for a bit

Was getting slightly excessive

He'll be back and no she isn't pregnant yet

Soooooooooon

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