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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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#HAREM
#DRAGON

Golden Great Ape (133)

'I feel fucking fantastic'

A huge savage muscular monkey, stood tall on two feet, his ripped chest pushed out and his mountain-like shoulders sloped back. Broly's fur was now completely golden, arcs of solid green lightning dancing menacingly around his figure. His hair had remained the same in Super Saiyan but now falling back slightly, the huge clumps standing tall like vines. His teeth had fully committed, jutting up and down out from his mouth, decorating his face with the intention of inspiring fear.

"ROAAAAAAAR!"

Broly was still in full control, the mental overload strong but nothing he couldn't handle, however, he still had the urge to beat his chest and bellow loudly, becoming the monkey.

His feet were laced with a thin layer of ki, almost invisible except at certain angles as it smoothly coated the surface of his foot, letting him hover over the sand.

"You think you're so tough?"

A small reptilian alien stood in front of the base, calling out Broly specifically.

'Do Frieza Force soldiers get tested before recruitment and you can only get in if you fail?' Yami questioned, not getting the idiocy.

This was literally an ant challenging an elephant.

"GRAAAAAAH!"

The small reptilian transformed completely, becoming a much huger creature that shockingly was as tall as Broly, dark grey scales covering its skin as its mouth lengthened, sharp teeth coming from its gums.

Yami looked at the reptilian monster in front of him and laughed.

'So the ant actually turned into a balloon,' he said deeply amused.

Broly walked towards the reptile, moving as if he wasn't a 25-foot tall creature.

Although the alien had changed forms it's power level was basically the same and was nothing Broly hadn't seen before.

The reptile charged forward, generating a scary amount of speed as it approached Broly, both arms pushed out to grip him.

Broly pushed his arms out as well, meeting the creature in the middle.

'I thought you were just being mean'

Broly tightened his grip on the creature and ripped both arms off completely, chucking them aside as streams of purple blood fell like a waterfall.

"AYYAAAAAAAK!" the creature cried, a beam of purple ki generating in its mouth.

'He really is like a balloon' Broly thought, unable to concisely calculate the fraction of his power he had to apply.

He didn't hesitate and smashed his leg up, causing the mouth of the creature to close, the beam breaking from its skin and soaring it into the sky as it was thrown up from the impact.

Broly brought his leg back down quickly and readied his stance.

BAM! BAM! BAM!

BINK! BANK! BONK!

BOOMF!

The soldiers on the ground watched with wide mouths as they hovered over the sand, watching their secret weapon be boxed by a huge monkey, punching him rhythmically as if it were a regular humanoid before letting the crumbled beast hit the floor, driving its foot onto his skull, breaking it immediately.

"ROOAAAAR!"

The air in front of Broly shifted, a powerful beam of force rupturing sound as he bellowed, beating his chest confidently.

The soldiers fled immediately, their thick skin penetrated by the harsh reality in front of them.

The reality that had settled his red eyes on them.

Broly leapt forward approaching the base in a single bound.

He raised both hands into the air and concentrated his ki, forming a huge boulder of green energy over his head. The soldiers looked back, too terrified to speak.

DOOSH!

Broly crashed the boulder against the whole base, flattening it outright with the sheer impact alone, not even exploding it.

'I feel great!' he said, flying in the air and chasing down the stragglers.

BOOOOM!

With force beyond a nuclear bomb, the ball of energy erupted behind him, creating an explosion so massive that it was visible from the surface of the planet, eating away at it and eventually forming a huge crater that was just shy of the Planet's core.

The force from the impact knocked out the soldiers if not killing them, making them all sink into the sandy land below.

'There's got to be a race local to this planet,' Broly thought, sending a ki pulse outwards which rapidly ran over the earth, quickly bringing up signatures.

Without wasting time, he flew quickly in the direction of the signal.

A group of mosquito people huddled around a small pond, their beaks long and their legs slender. They had thin scaly bodies that angled inwards, making them experts at attacking from afar.

"It's coming!"

They had all come from underground to see what the commotion was, hearing a huge explosion far away that rattled the whole planet, making their burrowed homes shake as an earthquake off the scales rocked.

Broly approached the people who stared back at him in awe, not believing if their eyes were working.

"Bring your leader!" he commanded, crossing his arms.

A particularly muscular fellow came from a hole, his scales being much longer and claws much sharper than the others.

"I come to your people in peace, I simply had to exterminate the army that belonged to an enemy of mine," Broly said, his deep and loud voice echoing through the canyon.

"You killed all the Frieza's force soldiers?" the mosquito man chirped.

Broly chuckled loudly.

"What do you think?"

"Thank you very much! You saved our people!" he said, bowing his head to Broly.

'I'll allow this,' Yami said, remembering the first leader to submit to Broly.

"If only you had arrived sooner!" the mosquito man lamented.

'What does that mean?'

"Speak!" Broly commanded.

The mosquito man reeled back, slightly terrified of Broly.

"A few days ago, the troops started massacring our people in high numbers, accusing us of being traitors! They killed all of our children and elderly!" the mosquito man lamented.

Broly was able to feel the bitterness in his voice.

'He's probably doing that on other planets too and since you cut the signal, that was the last order he gave,' Yami said gloomily.

"Worry not, for he is dead," Broly said before promptly leaving, getting back to his own ship.

Little did he know that for generations upon generation stories of the mad monkey would be told, the legendary golden figure who appeared and slaughtered their oppressors.

'How are you supposed to power down from Great Ape?'

Beforehand, Broly had simply installed a Blutz Wave disruption device onto his ship but there was no way this was the genetic way to resolve the form.

Broly learned that the Super Saiyan forms were a sort of mastery thing, if you stayed in the form for a long time and were able to control your emotions and power then the multiplier would increase, his Legendary Form actually wore off naturally after a battle had concluded and there was no more bloodlust.

This wasn't the case for Great Ape though, he knew from his parents that if a Saiyan in Great Ape form was defeated then they would go back to normal but this couldn't be the only way to leave the form.

'If I'm honest, I have no idea, most Saiyans compress and collapse due to mental fatigue but that isn't a problem for you, you could be waiting weeks until the stress gets to you,' Yami said, thinking critically.

'Compress?' Broly thought, intrigued.

Time

Thank you for reading

I'm going to sleep now

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