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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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"Body Change!"

Ginyu's hand fluttered purple as he stretched out his arms, firing a dark purple energy beam from his chest at Broly, who furrowed his brows.

He immediately leapt back, not wanting to swap bodies with the throbbing purple humanoid.

Burter quickly escaped hurriedly, a vicious snarl on his face as he made his way back to his teammates, his face slightly bruised.

"Blimey! He's actually faster than the blue hurricane!" Jeice said, using Burter's nickname.

Captain Ginyu waved his hand in the air, changing the course of the beam and allowing it to curve back into his own body, then he cast two serious eyes at Broly.

"Our opponent today is someone we can't take lightly if you underestimate him you will die," Ginyu said clearly, analysing Broly's figure.

'So they're not complete morons after all,' Yami said, some surprise found in his voice.

'They're the strongest team in the Frieza Force, while their power levels are so low it's funny, they have to wield some kind of special technique,' Broly responded, interested to see what they would do.

Guldo's eyes widened, seeing the golden tail swishing in the air behind Broly.

"H-He's a Saiyan!" he exclaimed, stuttering as he spoke, his face turning dark.

"Saiyan's don't have blonde hair," Recoome stated, staring at Broly confidently.

"And they're not that powerful," Burter said spitefully, wiping blood from his lips.

"His eyes are also a different colour," Jeice pointed out, slightly on edge.

"I don't know what happened to him but that's definitely a Saiyan!" Guldo said adamantly.

'His arrogance reminds me of Vegeta and his size of Nappa, although they aren't nearly as strong as him,' Ginyu thought, pondering Guldo's words.

"In any case, GO!" Ginyu shouted.

Without wasting time, Guldo entered his stance, the eyes on the side of his head as well as the eye on his face becoming wide and his arms rising high into the air. He inhaled deeply before shouting.

"Time Freeze!"

WHYURP!

Guldo closed his mouth quickly, doing his best to hold his breath and looked back at Broly who smiled at him in frozen time.

'Scary!' he thought as he approached.

'I'm going to beat you to an inch of your life! Punishment of a 100 blows!' Guldo shouted mentally, smacking his first hard against Broly's knee.

CRACK!

"ARGGGGH!"

Guldo breathed out harshly as he screamed, his hand still throbbing from the self-inflicted damage.

"What's your knee made off? Gold?"

Broly blinked, sensing that the small green thing had moved.

"How did you do that?" he asked, genuinely curious.

"Why would I tell you?" Guldo said, wondering whether he had broken something or not.

The other group members didn't stand by idly.

Recoome had taken two steps back, drawing lines in the dirt and opened his mouth wide, bright purple energy brewing while Jeice and Burter both levitated into the air, forming red and blue barriers around their bodies.

Captain Ginyu boldly charged towards Broly.

"Let's see what he that dares to-"

BINK!

Broly punched him in the face, connecting strongly as he pushed Ginyu's pulsating head back, right in front of a wide-eyed Guldo.

"You hit the captain!"

"What was that technique!?" Broly said, looking down on Guldo, standing menacingly.

"It was my secret ability!" he spilt out quickly.

"I can freeze time!"

Broly's eyebrows raised.

"Seriously?"

"I swear on my life!" Guldo said, trying to stabilise his breathing, his heart rate all over the place.

"Is it a ki-based technique or genetic?" Broly asked curiously.

"Genetic!"

"Trash!"

Broly punted Guldo high into the air, not entirely unlike a football as he flew, all four of his eyes bulging out as blood shot from his mouth.

"Recoome..."

Dark purple energy rose around his body, the earth-shaking violently under his pressure, rocks scattering as variously cracks lined the floor.

"Eraser Gun!" he yelled somehow, firing a dark purple beam in Broly's direction, the ground tearing up underneath him.

In the air Burter and Jeice seemed to fuse, a large purple orb in the sky where they once were fluttered in the air, ripples channelling through it.

"Purple Spiral Flash!"

From the purple orb, a rain of purple ki blasts descended from the sky, showering down in Broly's direction by the dozen.

"Milky Canon!" Ginyu shouted, a small purple ball of ki rapidly charging in Ginyu's hand, becoming much bigger and shooting to Broly.

"Medium Barrier"

A thick Broly-sized sphere formed in the ground, shielding his body completely.

'It seems like they're nothing special, just slightly above average fodder,' Yami said, tired with the time Broly gave his opponents.

It was easier to just kill them.

A deep purple fog appeared around Broly as he de-activated his barrier, all of the attacks exploding harmlessly on the surface.

"He has to be dead now right?"

"Nobody in the universssse could sssssurvive our combined attackssss!"

"Yeah, he's as dead as a muskrat on thanksgiving!"

"Hahaha! Recoome beam kill enemy!"

Ginyu's eyes narrowed, able to detect a reading from the fog.

"Wait a minute," Broly said, realising something.

"B-Butter right?" Broly said pointing at Burter, his name sounding awkward in his mouth.

"BURTER! My name is Burter!" Burter said angrily, almost coming down to Broly.

"You said you were 'The Fastest In The Universe' right?"

"Yeah, so what?"

"Well, what about Frieza? His power level is way higher than yours so technically he would be the fastest in the universe, if I didn't exist of course," Broly said clearly.

"Excluding Frieza," Burter said, his eyes narrowing.

"Well, then what about Guldo? He can freeze time so wouldn't that-"

"I'M NOT SLOWER THAN FUCKING GULDO! BLUE HURRICANE!"

Burter's body blurred blue, rapidly approaching Broly in less than a few seconds, arriving in front of him with his fists tightened.

Broly's eyes strained, adapting to the strange type of movement.

"Mach Kicks!"

Burter's legs produced three afterimages, all seemingly heading straight for Broly.

WSH!

WSH!

WSH!

All three strikes hit the air, Broly dodging them easily.

'So this snake fellow is actually worth something,' Yami said, slightly impressed with the technique.

"Huh? Why aren't you getting hit!?" Burter shouted frustratedly, using Mach Punches as well.

Broly swayed each attack carelessly, his movements producing a quiet sonic boom as his body split into three, each moving to the left or right of Burter's attacks.

"That's a really good technique! I'm going to steal it!"

Broly slapped Burter's leg down, forcing him to stumble forward and mirrored his movements, seven different fists flying towards Burter's face.

"Impossible! How could- My face!"

Burter stumbled backwards, his face nothing short of caved in as Broly in his excitement collided into him without holding back.

Broly chased Burter, each of his strikes containing several afterimages to the point of which the rest of the Ginyu Force became dizzy watching them.

Burter buckled in the air like a sandbag, his top of the line armour breaking like cheap plastic under the force of Broly's blows, eventually collapsing to the floor when Broly was satisfied with his form.

"He broke," Broly said, forgetting he was in Super Saiyan.

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