Ye Xishui sat gracefully in the carriage, her daughter, Ye Xue, resting peacefully in her lap. After dinner, Xue had indulged in far too many sweets, which Ye Xishui had allowed despite knowing better. They had spent some delightful moments together, and now, completely worn out, Xue had fallen into a deep sleep.
Gently stroking Xue's soft hair, Ye Xishui's expression softened, though her senses remained sharp. Subtly, she became aware of a peculiar shift in the atmosphere. The energy of heaven and earth, typically stable, was rapidly increasing, almost surging.
A faint realization dawned on her: the invisible barrier that had long prevented her breakthrough felt as though it might loosen. It was only a fleeting sensation, but it filled her with hope. The path ahead was still long, but for the first time in years, she felt confident that the hurdle could eventually be overcome.
Yet, she was not the only one sensing these changes. Across the continent, every Titled Douluo, without exception, felt the same stirring energy. The phenomenon wasn't limited to humans—soul beasts also experienced the shift, their instincts alerting them to something extraordinary.
That night, many across the land would find sleep elusive. In the Heaven Spirit Empire, someone claimed to have glimpsed the image of the old Heaven Dou Empire in a mirror. In the Dou Ling Empire, an individual saw a vision of the nine sacred mountains of the old Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Clan. And in the Star Luo Empire, a man saw the ruling Dai family in his dreams—an omen so terrifying that he nearly chose to end his life, for speaking of such visions could lead to execution. Xu Family wouldn't sit idly if someone spoke like this.
In the depths of the Star Dou Forest, the Three-Headed Scarlet King, weary from monitoring the Destiny Lion, sought to refresh himself by the Lake of Life. But as he leaned down to drink, his reflection in the water stared back at him with blood-red eyes, radiating an ominous aura that sent a shiver through his powerful frame.
Shaken, he closed his eyes and tried to dismiss the experience as a hallucination. But how could a being as strong as him imagine such things without external interference? His instincts screamed at him to take the matter seriously. Without delay, he raced to find a figure who might have answers: Di Tian, the Beast God.
Di Tian, looked like handsome middle-aged man stood near Lake of Life observing changes that were happening.
"Di Tian, Di Tian!" The Scarlet King's voice was laced with urgency. "While drinking at the Lake of Life, my reflection glared at me with killing intent. I thought I was hallucinating, but how could I, without any external interference? Something isn't right."
Di Tian studied the Scarlet King with a momentary glance. After a brief silence, he spoke, his voice deep and resolute.
"Take care of the Destiny Beast. Heaven and earth energy is shifting, but I cannot say for certain what is causing it. I'm heading to meet the Lord."
Without further explanation, Di Tian turned and disappeared into the depths of the Lake of Life, leaving the Scarlet King to ponder.
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Shrek Academy, Shrek City
Shrek Academy had cemented its position as the number one academy on the continent and now functioned as the continent's overseer, a role reminiscent of the former Spirit Hall. They claimed to eliminate evil soul masters, though at times they branded their enemies as such to justify their actions. They kept the empires of the continent in check, maintaining an air of neutrality. However, their influence was undeniable. Most graduates, when forced to choose between their homeland and Shrek Academy, would side with the academy.
This perceived neutrality, combined with their overwhelming power, made the three great empires wary of them.
In the hallowed Poseidon Pavilion, a rare and urgent meeting was taking place despite the lateness of the hour. Five individuals were gathered, each emanating an aura of immense strength and authority.
At the head of the table sat an elderly man, his presence dominating the room. He was Mu En, a Level 99 Titled Douluo, revered as the Dragon God Douluo. If the true Dragon God could witness this title being used by what he might consider a "mere ant," he would likely vomit blood in indignation. Nevertheless, Mu En was the current leader of the Poseidon Pavilion, and his strength was undisputed.
To his left sat a middle-aged man with a strikingly handsome face. This was Zhou Wei, another Level 99 Titled Douluo, known as the World Controlling Douluo and the deputy leader of the Poseidon Pavilion.
Opposite Zhou Wei was an elderly man with silvery hair that gleamed in the dim light. He was the third Level 99 Titled Douluo in the room, Long Xiaoyao referred to as the Dragon Emperor Douluo, his martial spirit as fearsome as his title suggested.
Beside him sat a young-looking woman with a serene beauty that defied her age. She held the Dragon Emperor Douluo's hand, their gestures unmistakably those of a devoted couple. She was Mu Qingxi, a Level 98 Titled Douluo known as the Green Light Douluo, her martial spirit being the rare and powerful Green Light—a healing martial spirit. Her spirit not only granted her unparalleled healing abilities but also preserved her youthful appearance. Even two centuries later now, she is remembered as the greatest beauty of Shrek Academy.
Opposite her sat a middle-aged man whose shy glances toward Mu Qingxi betrayed his feelings. He was Xuanzi, another Level 98 Titled Douluo, known as the Taotie Douluo for his insatiable appetite and formidable strength.
The atmosphere in the room was heavy with tension. Their expressions were grave as they discussed the sudden and unprecedented surge of heaven and earth energy that had swept across the continent.
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"Do any of you have opinions on why this is happening so suddenly? Even the Golden Tree sent me a warning and urged me to uncover the cause," Mu En spoke gravely, his expression solemn.
"We're all in the dark," Zhou Wei replied, his tone carrying a faint smile, betraying a lack of true concern. "But if I were to guess, I'd say something special might have been born. The abruptness of the energy surge makes this the most plausible explanation I can think of. I even tried divining through the stars, but they all appear hazy now."
Though Zhou Wei outwardly seemed relaxed, there was a glint of ambition in his eyes. Deep down, he was thrilled at the possibility of such an event. If the energy surge heralded the birth of something extraordinary, it might also pave the way for him to become a God. His mind wandered to the so-called "Son of Luck," who was rumored to have awakened his martial spirit today. Both he and Mu Qingxi were quietly waiting for the boy.
Zhou Wei's gaze drifted toward Mu Qingxi, but resentment flickered in his eyes. If not for her, he might have had a chance to seize the Son of Luck for himself. However, her influence was undeniable, and she could easily complicate matters for him.
Mu Qingxi, oblivious or indifferent to Zhou Wei's internal struggle, smiled lightly, her charm effortlessly piercing his defenses. Despite being over two centuries old, Zhou Wei felt his heart tremble under her beauty. But as his thoughts lingered on her, a shiver ran down his spine. Zhou Wei knew a secret—one from his past life. Back then, Mu Qingxi wasn't "Mu Qingxi" but "Mu Qingxian," a man Zhou Wei had bullied relentlessly. The revelation left him conflicted, and her current charm only deepened his unease.
"I also agree with Brother Zhou," Mu Qingxi said, her voice soft and melodic, like a soothing breeze. "Perhaps something extraordinary has indeed been born. Didn't I mention the Son of Luck? This could be related to that."
Her words captivated the room, even calming Zhou Wei's resentment momentarily, though he couldn't help but shudder at her unintentional creepiness. Outside, the world might regard Zhou Wei as Shrek Academy's true Controller, but inside the Poseidon Pavilion, everyone knew that Mu Qingxi was the real force behind the scenes.
"I think Elder Qingxi is absolutely right," Xuanzi chimed in, his usual obsession with food and drink replaced by an unmistakable awe for the beauty in front of him.
Mu En's gaze swept the room, pausing briefly on Long Xiaoyao, his old friend and rival in both power and love. With a light cough, he interrupted the discussion.
"Alright then, if that's what you all believe, Long Xiaoyao and I will investigate further. Qingxi, I'd like you to contact your organization, CP-0, to gather intelligence on this matter."
"Don't worry, Brother Mu," Mu Qingxi replied with a reassuring smile. "I'll ensure we have answers within a month."
"Good. Then it's settled," Mu En declared, standing to conclude the meeting. However, before anyone could leave, Long Xiaoyao turned to Mu Qingxi with a playful smile.
"Qingxi, would you care to join me? Let's play Dragon and Phoenix," he suggested, his tone lighthearted.
"Of course, Brother Long," Mu Qingxi replied, her voice carrying an elegance.
Zhou again shuddered with fear imagining if Brother Long knew that Qingxi was once a male. And still she could hide or grow that mainly organ, like she did with him for first.
He immediately stood up from seat and flew away towards his mansion without looking back.
How's is it going. I know there are very few chapters to judge but I wanted to ask that writing is good?
I suck at writing dialogues.