Doomed from the Beginning

Loved the starting ! And quite an interesting development! The quality is nice !and the genre fantasy has always been my favorite! So i will suggest anyone who loves fantasies, should give this a read!

A good narrative, keeps you hooked. Very well written.It is also well researched. I can almost imagine the characters while reading. Eager to read other books by the author ! ^.^[img=recommend]

I love the character development and the plot in the story. It is very subtle and the characters get a lot of time to develop. This creates wonderful strong background for the story. One of the best books i have read in this genre. Excited for more chapters[img=update]

Well written, a bit fast paced for me but i love your plot and how you introduced your character, everything will blend together when time goes i suppose. Good job Author.

In the first 5 chapters, the story seems fast pace, especially that continous names of the characters and the places that feels pop out of no where, but in the next one, you will much understand the story. The characters and the story, very unique, at first you won't understand them but if you tried to decipher them you will actually like them. The continuous character name confused me at first, but the emotion in the character is really vibrant... the way the author makes it is very unique on its own, and a bit mysterious. If you gonna read it, make sure to continue in Chapter 6 and above before letting this one go, it's worth the read...

I'm still at the beginning but I love where its headed to, the adventures the characters will go on and how the worlds are designed. Very beautiful book. Keep it up author😊😉

I like how the author delivers his story through words. I just think, in my opinion, that we should refrain from capitalizing all letters in a word? As long as it's not an acronym or whatsoever. Well😂 correct me if am wrong huhue

Right from the start it already hooks You. I love fantasy novels and this Is just an example of why I stan fantasy novels!❤️❤️❤️ there’s never a dull Moment in every chapter!

You have a gripping plot. I am not that interested in fantasy but I had some exceptions and yours gets in the list. The dialogue delivery that persists throughout the story is simple and yet being its main objective - to convey what the character is trying to say. I think you have succeeded in having eyes- friendly (Yeah I just made that up XD) dialogue structures. I also observe that you haven’t extensively given attention to detail that would otherwise spoil the story if you had mishandled it. I think simplicity of detail really suits your story. It’s just what I feel... if you wish to be the descriptive JRR Tolkien, then I have no objections. It’s your story after all. I think you have also taken care of grammar and stuff and I really appreciate you using different dialogue tags (it kinda kept me active during the reading and again it comes to simplicity in descriptiveness) Overall, very nicely written!

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Really love the plot of the story and the over all content. Enjoying the story so far and am really eager to read more works by the author ❤️.xx

The story has some rich flavors the concept, the narration, the characters, the plot everything it's very engaging once you start reading it. All in all it takes to a different world. very impressive. ❤❤

its really nice to read as going through it gets more interesting and i m eager to read it more .... i started reading it in the free time but it got more and more of my interest to read it

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Love character development and the fantasy world where the story goes on...the names of the character kinda intriguing...so far it's pretty amazing...looking forward to further updates...

So far this is amazing..!! The character development and the story background is what I like the most in this story. Looking forward to more updates!! [img=update]

From the first chapter itself the story gets interesting. It builds up slowly and I'm still wading my through it. The story line is amazing where the writing style definitely stands out. I love fantasy genre which provides much needed escapism from life thus I'm already loving it.

First of all I loved the plot of the story and secondly the characters grow through it making it interesting to read. I love the fantasy genre and and loved reading every chapter so far ❤️