Reviews of DISCONTINUED SORRY

The story was interesting enough. Then from a shop bought scrol on a whim... I know... He got demon summoning... It kinda ruined the rest of the story for me... I don't know where the writer will take it, but for me the further out of the naruto verse the story goes the less interesting it becomes. I love how the author decided to try do his own thing and not stick to Canon by principle which is a rare thing these days, I just dislike the turn of events as I don't really like summon animals, demons too. It should be an interesting read tough. It was well formatted and everything. I think most Canon events will only take place due to quests issued by his system

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Author here, just so you know, I’m very flexible with changing the story for being “realistic” to naruto jitsu, and if you don’t like something to the point of wanting to drop it, please tell me.

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