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Dimensional System!!

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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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FOX_ZRS
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Miki_Marlo75
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Sin To be honest, the plot has many gaps and a little out of rhythm, the grammar is good, I think I'm not looking at that much if the story is right, but it shows a little and the errors are more visible.