OmaeWaMou
Well,first of all,I enjoed reading this and really like mindset of mc and how realistic he is.On the other hand,there is too much his monologue and they repetitive....Mc is smart-yes,he understand he's own flaws-that's good and all,but you see,it's do nothing to him and most of a time he staying indecisive about what to do.Don't even mentioned how low-key and small his precence to others.He have no goal,no hobby,no interest and even more no precence towards others characters.Yeah and breaking 4 walls in his though,how original.... Anyway,most of my concern,that it lacks anything intresting besides power/traits,not even other characters can't do a bat sh*t intresting.And I don't even know if something going to change in his wicky-wacky way of living....Just want to say,even if he is you everyday joe from a school,that a little bit smarter than average,doesn't mean he is intresting... Well in a conclusion,I have a feeling that it either be dropped and forgotten not even 30 chapters in future,or no one gonna read it.But still will looking forward for a hopefull,better future,so good luck.
Holy crap. Can I just say how impressed I am with this novel despite it only having 6 chapters. A lot. My god I love this Idea and the protagonist AND my favorite part is the protagonist is NOT I repeat NOT an idiot. Its hard to write a genius character when one is not a genius themselves but this story nailed it so far. Im impressed.