Devotion: Perception

I like it, pretty good for a short story, and pretty good for a kid. Its pretty gay though, which I see as a good thing, its good. 8/10 would read again

I really like it! Its good! I like short stories, and this is a good short story, I like how original the worldbuilding is, but its too fastpaced, which I guess most short stories are.

I like it, its a good short story, and the world building is pretty good for a short story. It hasnt been finished yet, but it has lots of potential.