Detesting The System: Sundering Fate

Honestly it's really enjoyable. The MC is just doing his own thing so far without caring about others and it's pretty enjoyable. He's not really abusing the system as much as he could be as he could have all kind of support perks that make him slightly op but good story overall. The main problem is author does this as a release so the stability is bad, I just hope author doesn't drop and I can enjoy the story whenever it does release.

To be honest I find this novel to be more entertaining then the authors other one. I think that this is more of a 'realistic' take on a normal persons reaction to certain events. If I was do be stripped from my live for the reasons within this novel, then I too would react in a similar way. The grammar is above standard for webnovel, and the plot is nicely twisted. The chapters could be longer, but I'm just saying that because I enjoy what's there. The novel has great potential, but may not be realised due to the authors motivation for writing this. Kekeke. The only request is more updates, and longer chapters. Feelsbingeman.

The op is misleading i give 1 star for the good grammar.weak MC makes for a trash novel. 😑😕😐😐😐😐😐😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

Very cool fanfic🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿

The MC becomes beyond OP after only two weeks and then starts to impart skills to people lol it’s really dumb and 60% of the chapters are just info dumps on his skills that are new and the ones we already know about

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This book is some bull**** wrap in a flail of ass wipe and with small dash of ‘bleach my eyes to unsee that crap’. Trash trash trash..I’ve never seen a book with so much potential end up being so trash smh😔🤔

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Sometimes it doesn't make sense.

interesting

5* gift, although if I had a criticism it would be to clean your chapters up in terms of structure, the text and characters are a bit wacky at times other than that this is great

HAHAHAHAHA! My Shamelessness knows no bounds! This is but a mere fanfic so I couldn't care less what the masses think! Follow along the journey of "some guy" — It's literally a spoiler to say his name as that doesn't come up for a while and I'm shamelessly writing this review with literally only Chapter 1 being released... — as he dies on Earth and gets to live out the usual reincarnation with a system trope. Anyways, from the way he gets the system, to his general demeanor, I'll try to stand out from the rest! But, I'll leave it up to more competent people to leave up credible reviews. Can't exactly trust the author now, can you? The inherent bias is almost laughable!