Here author's review :) This will be the story between a vampire and a girl, drawn to each other by obscure forces... There will be love, a lot of passion, and a few mysteries to solve. It won't be long (I'm currently planning between one and two hundred chapters; unless I have a huge inspiration, it won't be longer than that), but it will be full of fluff, juicy moments and a lot of irrational, destined love :D
Well written and draws you in easily. I binged all available chapters in one reading. I am happy the author updates regularly so I wont wait long to find out what happens. I am used to fantasy romance books where the male characters dont have so much self control and give into their passions. To read about a ML that is so restrained is new to me and I secretly wish he would let go as obviously the FL desires him. But I know its a slow burn so I am patient and hoping it will get more intense
The povs... my goodness author! You really know how to write into their character! The mystery is neat to read and the story is intriguing. Only thing I would recommend is to change their speaking to quotes. I am not one for pov jumping from one character to the other, but I think the author maintained it well! READ THIS NOVEL!!!
As I write this review, the book is still new and has less than 10 chapters. Yet I can say it's one of my favourite stories in this app. First, because the author has already proven her talent with her first two published novels. And most of all, because thie relation between Julia and Leo is one of the most heartwarming relationship in Webnovel. In the first chapters, they're oblivious for their shared love but you can feel how natural the tenderness and affection they have for each other and it melts your heart. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this wonderful love novel !
I have to say, this was a really fun read. I lovw how mysterious it is, the author leaves many unanswered questions which really draws you in to the plot and characters, as well as some fantastic world building to suppliment the vivid imagery they create. I love the dual perspective and the fact the reader gets to see the emotions and thoughts of both a human and a vampire reallt adds a layer of depth to the story. Also can I just say, I love Leo. He has a perfect mix of 'scary imposing vampire that could realistically kill you in a heartbeat' combined with a more gentle natured sterotype. His shifting moods and inner turmoils are something I really enjoy reading. Fantastic work author
I love this story!!!! I really enjoy the protagonists! They’re round characters with backstories that arent completely laid open right at the beginning which gives them some kind of mystery! They also have nice chemistry! Neither of them seems toxic either which often happens with soulmate stories! Can‘t wait for the next chapters to be released!!! [img=update]
It's a good story. You have a good grasp of grammar and spelling. The only thing I feel you need to change is the talking. Rather than the arrows, maybe just stick to quotation marks. The story development is steady; not too rushed, but not too slow either. The character design is quite good too. You've done a good job.