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DEMONIC SYSTEM

I know the first 5-10 chapters are not very good, but if you fold and progress, then it gets better. -------------------------------------------- In a world of humans, demons, and half-humans, people all over the world have abilities given by the gods. While these abilities are given to humans by the gods, half human and devils are given these abilities by blood lineages. Our main character (jake), on the other hand, does not have any skills. And one day, when he was beaten by many men in his school, including his closest friends, he swears a sincere oath, 'one day I'll take my revenge on you all', just then two panels open in front of his eyes. {have completed the requirements for the demonic sytem, ​​hell has heard your oath. Would you like to enable the demonic system?} {yes} {no} looked at the other panel after reading this. {heard your heavenly vow and answered it. Do you accept that heaven will reward you if you remove your sense of vengeance? } {Yes} {No} {note: you can only select 1 of them.} friends, this is my first novel attempt and my native language is not English so if I have mistakes, I would appreciate it if you let me know :) Join My Patreon https://www.patreon.com/DEADLY_SHADOW

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CHAPTER 1: OLD FRİEND , NEW FOE

It is a day like all days. I am at lunch break.

"Yo~! Jake what's up. Are you going to lunch?"

'When I looked the direction of the sound I saw he is Alec. He is very popular in school and he has a lot of friends and girlfriends. The reason why he has so many girlfriends is that he is too powerful in the school list he is a B-rank. the most powerful one in school is S-rank and there is only 1 person who has an S-rank. İn this human school part we have 1 S-rank, 10 A-rank, and 50 B-rank. Only these 3 of these ranks can enter the list so this is the reason why a lot of girls trying to make a relationship with them.'

"Yo~ Alec. Yeah, now I will go to the cafeteria. You too?" I asked with a nod

"No I want to ask you something can I ?" said Alec

"Yeah, you can," I said

"I want to make practice after school do you want to come and make practice with me," said Alec

"Hmm yeah I can do that but after school right? We meet in front of the school door okay?" I asked

"Yeah of course thanks," said Alec

After we talk. I ate lunch and school is over for rest of the day and I am going to school doors now.

"Hi, Jake. You came " Alec called out

"Yeah like we promised. Now what we will practice." I asked him getting closer.

"Okey how about first make duel each other to test each other's abilities," Alec said with try to thinking.

"Man you know. I don't have the ability." I said with a sigh

"No not like that. I mean make a duel with no ability just swords." Alec said while pulling his sword

"Okay. Who sends first the invitation." I said while pulling my sword.

İn whole world if someone wants a fight with someone they have to use their cards for this. The task of the card is to determine who won or lost in a duel or battle and to maintain compliance with the rules.

"Okey, what are rules?" I said while taking my position.

"You choose." Alec said confidently.

"So how about 'who scratch first wins," I said

"Okey it's nice to me." Alec said easily.

"So let's get started." I said and be ready.

"3"

"2"

"1"

"START!!!!"

İt's been 1 hour and non of them couldn't scratch each other and finally.

"HIIIIIYAAAAHHHHH" Jake finally make a scratch on Alec

'WİNNER İS JAKE SNOWTAİL' This is what is written on the card

"HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!" After saw on the card Alec screamed with anger.

"H-HOW A UNTALENTED LİKE YOU CAN BEAT ME!!!!!!!!!"Alec screamed like crazy

"M-Man what are you saying y-you know this will not affect your ranking," I said while holding back

"WHİSTLE"

'What is the doing' I thought

After Alec's whistle, 10 students came to bushes some of them C-rank some of them D-rank

"W-WHAT İS HAPPENİNG HERE!!!!" I shouted

"I thought you were smart? But it appears even you cant understand whats Happening here HAHAHAHAH!!!!"

Alec started to laugh

"If you didn't hurt me i was gonna Just let you go but you scratched me and now i need pay Back Alec said with an evil smile in his face

"TAKE HİM !!!!!" Alec called students and all of them started to running on Jake

"EARTH BİND" One of the students shouted and earth branches hold Jake's arms and legs

And Alec and his men started to beat Jake

'KİCK'

'KİCK'

'PUNCH'

'PUNCH'

'KİCK'

"Hey Mr.Alec you know he has a very sexy sister and mom after he's dead theyre gonna need someone to take care of them." One of the students said with a laugh

Jake almost fainted but after he heard one of the students words his anger rose and he released all his killing intent

'Mana control

This skill has everyone in the world but everyone has special ability's so no one trying to upgrade this but Jake has only this and because of this Jake upgrade this ability to his limits .

And Jake controlled mana in the air little by little and the mana spread all over the student's internal organs

'MUCH, MUCH, MUCH DEEPER İNSİDE AND'

'DİE'

"Yeah, I know that person must be me right?" Alec said with an evil smile

"O-Of course but can we get in on the ac"- the student couldn't finish his words as Every internal organ exploded while blood flowed from his eyes,ears and mouth. And student died like this

"W-What is happening. Kill him" They started much more

And Jake's body loses all power and faint his heartbeats almost gone so Alec and his men thought he is dead and throw him outside of school to forest

Jake screamed on deep inside

'I WILL DESTROY THEM.THEY WILL SUFFER A HORRIBLE AND PAINFUL DEATH'

And something happened and jake's body full of energy and two POP-UP appeared in his eyes

{HEAVEN WATCHED YOU AND GAVE YOU AN OFFER İF YOU THROW YOUR REVENGE DESİRE YOU WİLL GAİN POWER BUT YOU WON'T TAKE REVENGE }

{YES} {NO}

{NO}

'WHAT THE F*CK İS THAT THİS İS TOTALLY OPPOSİTE MY WİSH AND LOOKED THE OTHER ONE

{HELL HEARD YOUR WİSH AND READY TO GAVE YOU POWER BUT YOU HAVE TO THROW YOUR HUMANİTY AND BECAME A DEMON}

{YES} {NO}

"İF YOU WİLL HELP ME TO TAKE MY REVENGE I DON'T CARE TO BE DEMON

{YES}

And he fainted

{host's body restoration begins}

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{host's body restoration over}

{DEMONİC SYSTEM installation has begun}

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{DEMONİC SYSTEM installation has successful}

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