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This story is amazing I love how the older brother keeps fighting even though he is injured I love how so far none of the hashiras are dead or injured I love how much trouble he gives to shinobu and kanao I just rlly love everything about this story it is amazing in everyway be it character personality or even the entirety of the story I can't help but get excited when reading this amazing story and one that I highly recommend to all demon slayer fans
Though people gave this a really high rating and I agree with a few and this is one of the better Demon slayer fan fictions here in this app, the thought of the plot not really changing is kinda meh. . . Yes, it did change like some characters not dying, and some other minor stuff. But the plot hasn't really deterred much from the original. also, did it mention it had a harem? From what I could tell there wasn't any harems tag that I read. The harem may not have been prominent in the story, it really annoys when I suddenly find out after wasting so much time. Don't get me wrong, this books isn't bad at all. It's a good read if your bored, all in all I just felt kind of meh-- if you even understand that.
A very lovely take on the original Kimetsu no Yaiba, the writing as it is is sublime, smooth like silk I'd say, very nicely cooperated descriptive languages adding flavors and that much liveliness to the story, especially the setting and characterization, the story developed on a reasonable pace, the character delightful, flushed out nicely through their descriptive actions and feelings. One thing I'd say it felt lacking, not necessarily a flaw, is subtlety, characters seemed to popped into the plot, not given enough time to be introduced with their description being a bit "rough" and too specific, not really fitting with the narrative. The world building is decent, as it's a rehash of the canonical KnY's flawed building, decent, but nothing to write home about, a bit of a personal touch would be great. Overall a good read, very good quality story telling and writing skill