Edgelord666
I couldn't keep reading due to the fact the main character is being so underwhelming considering every single advantage he has, yet with all his intellect the author limits him to an example of sheldon cooper? Meanwhile he has 50 years of live experience of combat/fighting? reasonably overrated, however it dumps all dc universe races, their situations on you on chapter 4. So it is atleast educational to the interested? My limited view might be due to only reaching like chapter 5, but with how the MC was being built, and how the world was being explained i saw no reason to read further. - It might seem very critical of me to say all this, i believe in direct criticism. Author is doing a good job from what i can see. And by no means do i think his writing is "Bad" It can only get better.
TO THE AUTHOR, Bring Asians Characters as much as YOU bring the Western Characters in the FANFIC. Make MC a Grandmaster who teach them all kind Combat Arts(Chi, Qi, etc.,) and Magic - that all he has learned for Years in his preparations but only the necessary ones that can protect them and only to selected heroes the techniques to Heroes to protect Earth from multiversal dangers. Also, make the MC teach them not to destroy the Nature of Earth and fill or regain the Chi,Qi,Ki, Mana, etc., on Earth to refill it with full of nature energy, so that the life on earth will be habitable eternally especially with Technomancy(Tech-Magic). Hope to see these soon in the FANFIC. THANKS- READER.
you are great author san , you've made our blood boil just by your writing. I AM still having my face heat up with the way you have write the story, how you've punished them. thank you for this masterpiece. I don't care if this is not a original novel but this a original fanfic and your idea of this fanfic is reached the peak of reader's satisfaction level. You are great author san. Bow down to you.and please continue with chapters. thank you