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I'm again telling you,the story is already getting boring. just her getting power ups and not much content. please do something about it. I love your works but it just getting boring. If you can't do anything just combine few chapters so we can have going on some plot progression. Thank you for your hardwork.
for new readers, please don't get upset about this. He will only tell this to his team as he would have to give some explanation about how he know so much. BUT it will not matter much, and there isn't another mention about this in next chapters. so give this gem a chance.
author-san, I want to say few things. I love your ideas and as well as writing but I think you should combine all the chapters you write and post it once a week or two. The reason I'm saying this is because we readers love your content and wait for your chapters eagerly. But sometimes all we get is small chapters with not much change in plot. just the same plot with minor changes. I understand the reason as you already given an explanation but for us we don't get much intresting content. MC is very passive in all of your fics. so it gets boring after the fascination of new story or new powers goes down. That's why I think you should combine all the chapters. so we get much progress in plot in a single chapter and you won't have to change much of writing style. I would love to stack all the chapters and all of it once but I don't have much patience. And another thing I want to say is focus on single fic, if you can. take needed rest so don't get much bored with same story. Anyways, It's your story so do what's best for you. Thank you for your hard work, author-san.
at first I thought he was Damon Salvatore
wtf?? are you in some magical fantasy world.
these defences in clothes never get used in fanfics.
me three
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Yes, my fellow reader is right. Author san I told you this before as well. we don't want to read the original story, we could've just watched the show. Your Twilight fic is good as you did not follow the plot to the end. So please do something about it. Thankyou for your hardwork.