Reviews of Dc Reinhardt
Dc Reinhardt
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The story is a joke, one moment the MC is speaking then the next someone else is leaving the reader confused about the sudden shift in characters and then you have the storyline itself which is the most confusing aspect of this story, with how it jumps around between one plot to the next with no build-up whatsoever just bam new scene.
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The gammer is shit (even mine is but I won't deny the facts), the character is pathetic AF, the way the story is going on isn't likeable (maybe for r*tarded people not the ones with logic), the author think killing a man that almost killed you if it weren't for your superpowers is wrong, the author is soooo naive to the point of letting a man that could killed you, maybe r*pe your relatives kill them (why not) then run away leave just bc a r*tarded motherf*cker (Superman) told you so
Like Geralt and the slow relationship with Diana. The fact its a story based on comics and not a tv show is a nice change of pace. Geralt's relationship between other charecters is intresting and his view of the world is diffrent from the main DC heros. Overall intresting story keep up the good work
The novel's proposal is good. After all, it's DC you can get good stories from. But the author ruined everything, everything is very confusing, the story changes from POV easily. Dialogues are mixed and confusing, some dialogues lack depth. I realize that the author's writing is good, but he doesn't know how to layout a novel. He's just mixing it up. I really wanted to read the novel, after all, it is a DC fanfic, it is very difficult to find one around here. Sigh
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Great fanfiction with a more interesting main character than many other fanfictions. The story is following the comics and has a good flow with the balance between storylines. Has a good use of villains to fight the mc. Also best of all has a decent relationship depiction and not a harem that comes out of nowhere. Great novel i suggest that if you like DC Comics to read this fanfic.
this story is basically a joke cause the mc powers are a rip off of the the jade emperor from god of highschool just nerfed a lot. the grammar is fine as well as the world background. but the character design is terrible. with a lot of plot holes 1)gets powers from odin due him being the only one to meet the requirements 2)odin himself says his powers are more wisdom based so the mc shouldn't be struggling to understand stuff but since he is how did he meet the requirements 3) what are the requirements he speaks because right now it looks like he was just randomly picked cause he shows zero special qualities 4)what's with the hitting on diana. she keeps telling him she's taken but the mc ignores that and keeps hitting on her. he hasn't even targeted any other women just her 6)how is entrantress or is it harely or someone else able to mess with asgardian sigils he put on his house when that basically comes from a race of gods and demigods yet a mortal who has not even came in contact with it was able to mess with or interfer with it's workings plus the dude controls fundamental force so how is he frozen in time. 7) technically he supposed to be a demigod so how is he easily taken out by trank darts like didn't killer croc just break his teeth trying to bite him but thanks can get through his skin. there's more but I'm not interested in saying them but anyway author you really need to close these plot holes you put in their cause it can really confuse readers
I iam not too smart to write a review but here goes nothing, Writing quality is good altough there is typo here and there it's good compared to other story, story development is good it's not only about power up but hoe our heroes daily live, character design is super good i think we can see the traits of not only our MC but other pretty good, update stability you can see yourself but because i like the story here 5 star for you, the author design this story slow paced so i think the story has more to explore. Because i like the story here 5 star for you!
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The fan-fic is fun to read. The writing quality is overall stellar with few to none grammar errors and is easily readable. The updates are sometimes inconsistent but at least it is not dropped. The story development flows easily not including the Villification arc. The character design of the main protagonist is solid but is lacking in development for now. The world background is satisfactory due to the establishment of the DC universe but this background can be still easily found in webnovel.
This is a very good Fan-Fic. It gets off to a rough start but as the story progresses it gets better and better. This has so much potential and it is living up to it. Author you have done a great job keep up the good work. I cant speak for anyone else but I will always have you in my library and will always read your story. Thank You for the great story.🙂👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽😁
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