DARK LINE BETWEEN

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I love the plotline of the story. It's really mysterious and intriguing from the first chapter. Gosh, I like it. And, the protagonists, well, I can't decide who's my favourite yet. But, maybe I will. Love the book. Can't wait for more.

It has a good story development and the pace is decent I guess but not quite sure, anyway. You should definitely use Grammarly or similar apps to fix grammatical issues.

What a heart-catching novel....it really caught my attention to read it more. Gotta say the author has splendidly elaborated the story. It was awesome and I can symphatize with the lead All in All, great work!

I love the connection bet ween Bell and Michel . I like how the story builds up . I love that this doesn't usually have the same plotline . Keep writing [img=recommend]

After reading it, I found myself very interested in the story! You have done such a good job so far! I am totally supporting this! Keep writing, and working hard! :) -Popsicle_Jellyfish

I'm not usually the type to read romance novels, but here I am, writing a review for one. This book was able to draw me in with it's interesting title. No complaints about writing quality, except for slight punctuation errors here and there in dialogue. That is just formatting though, so there's no need to worry about that. Story development is great, I was able to immerse myself in the world of this novel and really follow along with the plot nicely with its perfect pace. Character design is detailed and unique for each of the characters in this novel - something I can appreciate. The world background could use some work, but this novel isn't too focused on that, so this is something extremely minor. Overall, this was a great read so far, and I'm looking forward to more chapters. Keep it up, author-san!

Great first chapter. Can't say more about the characters though. The plot is promising and really intriguing. Hope the mystery doesn't end too quickly

hi dropping my review here :) I must say that you have interesting premise in this story. The characters seemed to have complex background. Keep up the good work!

Hello author! First of all, I want to praise you for the superb characters' portrayal, detailed body language, and emotional descriptions. It was nicely crafted, I applaud you for that. But I may have a slight issue with regards to your story pacing, just a bit. I think it's too fast, leaving some gaps in the story here and there. It's not a bad thing, I assure you, it's just that I got lost between parts. Like, in the initial chapter she said she's alone and then someone came in? Then these two people appeared, I think you provide an explanation on what's their relationship but it hasn't sunk into me yet since it's not highlighted too well. Like some important parts that answered the question "why are they in that situation?" is not elaborated well. She was treated badly at first, and it sounds like she hates him, and then in the next chapter, she actually likes him? Yeah, you got me lost on that part. But other than that, you're story was superbly great. You describe your characters so well, I can picture them out vividly. And it's an awesome thing. You did a great job with this story author! It's mind-blowingly cool! Keep up the good work!

The plot is filled with mysteries and I'm liking the bond that Mike and Bells share, it's cute and adorable. The plot definitely has potential and I wish the author will keep updating it. Good work author!

The plot is super interesting and I gotta admit i am intrigued. I like the characters and i am very curios about them not gonna lie. The story has a steady pace, easy enough for one to understand how good the story is! So overall, I love it!

The story starts with a mystery, and that dark and mysterious element carries on. Nice plot. Interesting story. I'm having trouble with reading big blocks of texts though. Breaking those big chunks down would be nice =) Keep up the good work!

I love how the book pops off from the beginning and I love the character development. basically fell in love with the book. goodluck to the author.

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Superb. You got the storytelling skills, the great updating schedule, as well as the ability of crafting characters and showing their traits to the reader (instead of telling) The only thing that's offputting about this novel is the number of larger paragraphs, paragraphs that consist of too many sentences to the point where it looks like a large mountain of text. Regardless if the reader is reading on computer or mobile, I think it's best to cut down the paragraphs; give them space so it's easy on the reader's eyes. Other than that, all else is good.

There are a few issues here and there grammatically that the author can look over once the novel has been completed - while present, such as the mix in the character name from Belle to Bella from chapter to the next. The story is paced well and the development of the characters is fleshed out and even - their growth is organic in its nature. The writer has a good grasp of the English language and I would not be surprised if they were eventually contracted. This work is promising.

HI author, when I read your work, I was curious about the plotline, how will it be different than the cinderella story and I hope you would make great use of twisting some plot points for your benefits and overall, it was nice. Just looking forward to your next updates! Regards, Glenstonx

I like the premise of the story. It has a dark vibe and I like it. However, the grammatical error and capitalization of noun and proper tenses must be observed. You have a room for improvement. This novel overall is enjoyable to read.

Your writing skills is awesome how you narrate the background of your story and also the character's image it really creates a fascinating plot. When I was reading your story in the first chapter of your book you nailed it and I'm impress of how you made this plot. I would love to read your story again!😄