bluexubyung
I don’t write reviews often but I’d like to give my input. I have not been disappointed in any aspect when it comes to this book. There is great writing, great character development, great world building, and a pretty cool combat style. If I were to have a complaint it would be that I’m reading through these chapters to quickly so I’m having to wait for the author to release more.
Ahem haiya- The author here (please ignore the 5 starts ... thanks love ya'll) . . Okay so.. thanks a lot for the support people I really love you all and- I wrote this review to tell you guys about what to expect, and as a place to answer any questions or suggestions, you might have!! This is still a budding novel, but if you are looking for the following, please give it a read: 1) A realistic MC with a system that doesn't just grant him everything. 2) Intricate world-building, with exciting aspects and ideas. 3) Side characters that show growth and contribute to the story thanks! and please do support my other books as well... and am fully aware that my writing style may not be the best out there and can cause confusion and am sorry for that... I'll do my best to improve
Honest review here, this book is great job Author love the creation and how your characters are designed, there are a few grammar mistakes but who doesn't make mistakes, I do too and that can be fixed it does not stop this book though from being incredibly interesting Good luck to you Author and please keep doing your best highly recommended.
I'm gonna be completely honest here, this book has POTENTIAL! Author I'm not tryna gas you up but this book is GOOD. There were barely any flaws, maybe one or two mistakes but overall it was great. The structure of the writing was clear and concise and the writing quality wasn't bad either. A definite 5 stars from me. Keep it up!