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Correcting One’s Mistakes - The Redemption of Obito Uchiha

This fan-fiction is inspired by T0X1N’s fan-fiction “Ghost of The Uchiha” and Fallen_Crown’s fan-fiction “Tales of Obito Uchiha.” All rights of ownership of the Naruto franchise belong to Masashi Kishimoto After the battle with Kaguya Otsutsuki, Obito was nearing his limit. He had given the remaining bit of his chakra to his now once again friend, Kakashi Hatake to help in the final battle. He had to leave now, for he had kept Rin waiting long enough. After exchanging goodbyes with Kakashi, the remaining bits of Obito’s chakra faded away. Though little did he know, his story was not yet over. He made many mistakes, so many in fact that it changed the shape of the Shinobi World itself. If he could have it his way, he would want to go back and stop himself from making those foolish mistakes. Unbeknownst to him, he would get that very wish. It was time for him to start his road to redemption. Feel free to read this if you’re interested in how this fan-fic came to be and what to expect (likely to be updated in the future): After reading Ghost of The Uchiha, I began to think about what it would be like for other characters in the Naruto franchise who had made mistakes in the past if they suddenly got another chance to fix everything they had done and redeem themselves. Well, one of the first characters that came to my mind was Obito Uchiha, one of the main villains of Naruto. Even watching the original anime I still found myself wondering what would happen had Obito gone down the right path and how different the Shinobi World would be. Of course I wanted to find a story like this, but I could never find a good one so I decided to try it myself. Though if this turns into a flop (I hope it doesn’t) as well then hopefully it will be the catalyst to inspire someone to write an even better one! And to be perfectly blunt, there will not be a harem, in my opinion there’s just too many of those and I’m personally not a fan of those things. The closest you would probably get is a small love triangle but that’s being highly questioned and likely won’t go into affect so harem lovers if that’s what you came for you would be better off leaving now. Also keep in mind that this is not a person who knows everything about the Naruto world inside Obito’s body (if that wasn’t obvious already). Although he knew a lot as a behind the scenes, operating from the shadows kind of antagonist, he doesn’t know every little detail. So don’t expect him to be completely flawless when it comes to the flow of time. I would like to say this now. I am a rookie writer and have actually never properly written anything like this before so if something is not to your liking or there are some mistakes in the grammar or plot itself I apologize in advance and will try to change things as this goes on. In terms of jutsu names and what not I am not sure whether to use the English translation or the Japanese translation. I am a English dub watcher when it comes to Naruto, so I will be using the names of jutsus as they are said in the anime. Now in terms of Chapter releases. I'm not gonna lie I probably won’t do regular chapter releases. I’m still a rookie and want to take my time to conjure up the next chapter and not rush it just so I can get it released before the deadline so if you’re not okay with this I am sorry, but I will not change it until I feel comfortable doing so. Don’t expect chapters to be like 40 whole pages either, writing that forst chapter felt like it took hours and I thought I had like 32 pages worth of words but ho boy was I wrong. Also the thumbnail of the story is not mine. If you are the creator and do not like your art being used PLEASE let me know and I will change it. If I need to add anything else here in the future I will, but that seems to be all for now. Please enjoy the read!

HiImHavi · Anime & Comics
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Chapter 1 - A Road to Redemption

The battle was finally over. Kaguya Otsutsuki has been sealed away. All nine tailed beasts are gathered in a circle around a small group of people. These people are Naruto Uzumaki, Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, and the Sage of Six Paths himself. Though the spotlight is not shining on our original main character, but on Kakashi, or rather the small remaining amount of chakra within his eyes. At this moment, Kakashi was talking to someone within his subconscious.

"I'm gonna get going soon. I really made a mess out of the Shinobi World. So much that I don't even know what to say to you before I go."

Kakashi, beneath his mask gave the man a smile and said, "We were able to say our goodbyes as friends, not enemies. I got to say goodbye to the old you.. the one who was always late because he was helping others. I couldn't ask for anything more."

The man standing in front of Kakashi was none other than Obito Uchiha, the one who made Kakashi who he is today. The one who was presumably dead, but come to find out he was the masked man with the fake identity of 'Madara Uchiha,' who's only goal was to plunge the world into an infinite dream. Now he stands before him not as an enemy, but as a friend.

Obito looked at Kakashi's smiling face and said, "Thank you, Kakashi." He gave Kakashi the warmest smile he could.

Obito then said. "Well, I'll be going then. I've been keeping Rin waiting for too long."

"You better give her a good excuse for being late." Said Kakashi teasingly.

"I told her I'd be helping you, so I'm sure she'll understand."

Kakashi brought his gaze to the ground. "Oh, I see."

With that, Obito faded away into nothing. Excited to finally see Rin once again, but also sad to leave his best friend behind.

Kakashi looked to where Obito once stood and said, "Obito.. thank you."

Obito then woke up soon realizing he was next to Rin on a wooden bench holding her hand. She was looking off into the distance as if she was admiring a beautiful view. Obito then saw that there was something small and pink on his shoulder. They were underneath a beautiful cherry blossom tree with many sakura petals falling from it. It was so huge that one might be intimidated, but to Obito it gave him a sense of ease, a feeling of safety a feeling that told him he could finally put everything down and just relax. He hadn't felt this way for a long long time. For the first time in years, Obito felt truly happy. Though albeit pretty late, he realized that he was in fact in his child body. Without a doubt he really can say he was Obito Uchiha. Just then, Rin spoke to him.

"You still have something to do don't you?"

Obito was startled and confused. Something to do? He thought he had done everything he can what more can he possibly do? The battle is over isn't it? Isn't it time to rest?

Rin got up from the bench with Obito's hand in hers and dragged him from his sitting position. While being dragged along by Rin he was confused as he realized they were now running towards the beginning of a paved road. Before they stepped onto the road, Rin stopped and looked Obito in the eyes with a beaming expression.

"You can start here." Rin said with a smile.

Obito gave her a quizzical look and said, "Start here? What do you mean? What's going on Rin? I thought we were done."

Rin said nothing and gave Obito a smile and then let go of his hand. As soon as she did, Obito began to move farther away from her, or perhaps she was moved away from him, Obito could not figure out which.

"Rin?! What's going on?! Why are you all the way back there?" Said Obito.

Rin said nothing. It was then Obito realized she was back at the bench beneath the towering cherry blossom tree. Rin changed from her cheerful expression to a slightly more serious one and said,

"You have to go Obito. You can't come back until you've reached the end of that road."

"What?! Rin I don't understand! Why can't I just finally rest? Why can't I just be with you?!"

Obito screamed in confusion, desperately hoping Rin woukd change her mind. Alas, she showed no signs of saying otherwise. Obito knew this, she was always like this from beginning to end. Even in the afterlife now.

To Obito's surprise, Rin began to become transparent. This made Obito panic and he tried to run to her, but no matter how far he ran he wasn't going anywhere. He was still at the beginning of the mysterious road.

Just before Rin completely vanished. She put on her signature cheerful expression while waving to Obito and said,

"I'll be waiting at the end of the road. Don't hurry though, okay?"

With that she completely disappeared.

Obito was confused, his mind was racing trying to figure out what is going on. 'What is happening? I don't want to be alone! Please! Please!'

"Please!"

He screamed the last bit of his thoughts out loud, but no one responded except his echo. He then turned to the long and empty road from what seemed like leaded to nothing. 'I guess I don't have any other choice do I? If Rin really is at the end of this road, then I'll just finish as fast as I possibly can!'

"All right! Then let's go!" Obito shouted.

However as soon as he took a step onto the road..

Everything went black.