Moltem
Alright, Author. Sorry if this sounds harsh or something like that, I used a translator to write this. This is my honest opinion, please accept it calmly. First, I think this story has a plot that is too mainstream and forced. The story moves too fast, making some very clear plot holes. Also, the story is quite predictable. And if I were to grade it, I would give a 6/10 score for your story. But don't worry, I know making a story is difficult so I try my best not to destroy your feelings (?). But, instead, I expect improvements in later chapters and, if possible, improvements in earlier chapters. If not ... well, I'll feel disappointed.
The story is quite good, and for the Itachi fans out there it's definitely worth reading you won't regret it. and no worries the story has many planned plot twists and amazing events that will be written in the future with your support, and hopefully you guys like it too cuz the author deserves it for his hard work and stable uploading! the story is just amazing! :3